tech review feedback

Author: nastasha-solomon

release-notes/elastic-security/index.md

@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@ To check for security updates, go to [Security announcements for the Elastic sta
 * Allows {elastic-defend} to automatically recover in some situations when it loses connectivity with {agent}.
 
 ### Fixes [elastic-security-9.1.2-fixes]
-* Fixes index syncing in non-default spaces [#230420]({{kib-pull}}230420).
-* Only creates a default index source if one doesn't currently exist [#229693]({{kib-pull}}229693).
+* Fixes privileged user monitoring index sync in non-default {kib} spaces [#230420]({{kib-pull}}230420).
+* Only creates a privileged user monitoring default index source if one doesn't currently exist [#229693]({{kib-pull}}229693).
 * Fixes a race condition in {elastic-defend} that may occasionally result in corrupted process command lines on Windows. When this occurs, `process.command_line`, `process.args_count` and `process.args` may be incorrect, leading to false positives.
 * Due to an issue in macOS, {elastic-defend} would sometimes send network events without `user.name` populated. {elastic-defend} will now identify these events and populate `user.name` if necessary.