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Co-authored-by: shainaraskas <[email protected]>

Author: eedugon

deploy-manage/security/_snippets/cluster-comparison.md

@@ -16,17 +16,17 @@ Select your deployment type below to see what's available and how implementation
 :::{tab-item} {{ech}}
 :sync: cloud-hosted
 
-| Category | Security feature | Status | Description |
+| Category | Security feature | Status | Notes |
 |------------------|------------|--------------|-------------|
 | **Communication** | TLS (HTTP Layer) | Fully managed | Automatically configured by Elastic |
 | | TLS (Transport Layer) | Fully managed | Automatically configured by Elastic |
 | **Network** | IP traffic filtering | Configurable | [Configure IP-based access restrictions](/deploy-manage/security/ip-traffic-filtering.md) |
-| | Private link | Configurable | [Establish secure VPC connection](/deploy-manage/security/private-link-traffic-filters.md) |
+| | Private link | Configurable | [Establish a secure VPC connection](/deploy-manage/security/private-link-traffic-filters.md) |
 | | Kubernetes Network Policies | N/A |  |
 | **Data** | Encryption at rest | Managed | You can [bring your own encryption key](/deploy-manage/security/encrypt-deployment-with-customer-managed-encryption-key.md) |
 | | Secure settings | Configurable | Automatically protected by Elastic |
 | | Saved object encryption | Fully managed | Automatically encrypted by Elastic |
-| **User Session** | Kibana Sessions | Configurable | [Customize session parameters](/deploy-manage/security/kibana-session-management.md) |
+| **User session** | Kibana sessions | Configurable | [Customize session parameters](/deploy-manage/security/kibana-session-management.md) |
 
 :::
 

deploy-manage/security/_snippets/enable-security.md

@@ -6,4 +6,4 @@ For self-managed deployments, security features are automatically configured whe
 If you want to use your own TLS certificates, then you should manually configure security.
 :::
 
-Deployments managed by {{eck}}, {{ece}}, {{ech}}, and {{serverless-short}} automatically configure security by default. This includes setting the `elastic` user password, generating TLS certificates, and configuring {{kib}} to connect to {{es}} securely. Disabling security is not supported in these deployment types.
+Deployments managed by {{eck}}, {{ece}}, {{ech}}, as well as {{serverless-full}} projects, automatically configure security by default. This includes setting the `elastic` user password, generating TLS certificates, and configuring {{kib}} to connect to {{es}} securely. Disabling security is not supported in these deployment types.

deploy-manage/security/data-security.md

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ For {{ech}} deployments, instead of the default, Elastic-managed encryption, you
 
 
 :::{note}
-There is no encryption at rest out of the box for deployments orchestrated using [{{ece}}](secure-your-elastic-cloud-enterprise-installation.md) and [{{eck}}](secure-your-eck-installation.md), or for self-managed clusters. You must instead configure disk-level encryption on your hosts. 
+There is no encryption at rest out of the box for deployments orchestrated using {{ece}} and {{eck}}secure-your-eck-installation.md, or for self-managed clusters. You must instead configure disk-level encryption on your hosts. 
 
 Configuring dm-crypt or similar technologies is outside the scope of the Elastic documentation, and issues related to disk encryption are outside the scope of support.
 :::

deploy-manage/security/self-setup.md

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ The automatic configuration:
 
 This automatic setup is the quickest way to get started and ensures your cluster is protected by default.
 
-::::{note}
+::::{warning}
 The automatic configuration does not enable TLS on the {{kib}} HTTP endpoint. To encrypt browser traffic to {{kib}}, follow the steps in [](./set-up-basic-security-plus-https.md#encrypt-kibana-browser).
 ::::
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ Each step builds on the previous one. For production environments, it’s strong
 
 ## Kibana security configuration
 
-Refer to [](./using-kibana-with-security.md) for detailed guidance on the following security topics:
+Refer to [](./using-kibana-with-security.md) to learn how to implement the following security best practices for {{kib}}:
 
 * Set an encryption key for clients sessions
 * Enable TLS on the HTTP service endpoint