Update 8-cicd.livemd

Author: hvalkerie19

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 Built in Elixir, for Elixir, by NCC Group - this tool will try to determine whether your codebase has a number of web vulnerabilities as well as the insecurites outlined in [Module 5 - Elixir Security](./5-elixir.livemd).
 
  ### <span style="color:blue;">Example</span> 
-Install Sobelow and add it to your application dependicies or install it by following the instructions https://hexdocs.pm/sobelow/readme.html
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-[Sobelow](https://sobelow.io/)
+Install [Sobelow](https://sobelow.io/) and add it to your application dependicies or install it by following the instructions https://hexdocs.pm/sobelow/readme.html
 
 Scan your project by running the following at a terminal in your project's root directory
 ```
 $ mix sobelow
-
 ```
-As a vulnerabilities scanner there are multiple categories of vulnerabilities sobelow is capable of discovering/reporting on.    
+As a vulnerability scanner, there are multiple categories of vulnerabilities sobelow is capable of discovering and reporting on.    
 
 For instance, there are a number of security issues published on the Common Weakness Enumeration (CWE) site - [CWE's](https://cwe.mitre.org/top25/archive/2022/2022_cwe_top25.html) and on OWASP Top 10 [OWASP Top 10](https://owasp.org/www-project-top-ten/).  
 
-Scanning tools like Sobelow map code patterns that may contain weakness that match these issues and report them back to developers/users.
+Scanning tools like Sobelow identify code patterns that match these issues and report them back to developers/users.
 
  ### <span style="color:blue;">Example</span> 
-Let's say you are interested in Injection Vulnerabilities.  There are several types of injection.  Referring to the CWE list, we see that #17 CWE-77 is for Command Injection, #25 CWE-94 is Code Injection, and #3 CWE-89 is SQL Injection.  If we look at the Owasp Top 10 for 2021, A03:2021-Injection is third on the list.  Sobelow has the capability to detect these types of attacks.
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+Let's say you are interested finding in places in your application that may be susceptible to injection attacks.  
+
+There are several types of injection.  Referring to the CWE list, we see #17 CWE-77 for Command Injection, #25 CWE-94 is Code Injection, and #3 CWE-89 is SQL Injection.  If we look at the OWASP Top 10 for 2021, A03:2021-Injection is third on the list.  Sobelow has the capability to detect these types of security issues.
 
-Injection issues are places in an application where a malicious actor can send commands, queries, that get processed as authorized code, to trigger the application into performing an unauthorized action.
+Injection vulnerabilies are places in an application where a malicious actor can send commands, queries, and other input that gets processed and executed as code.  Injection attacks can trigger the application into performing an unauthorized action or exposing sensitive data.
 
-[The following modules supported by Sobelow for the discovery of Command Injection Vulnerabilities](https://hexdocs.pm/sobelow/0.2.4/Sobelow.CI.html#content)
+[The following modules are supported by Sobelow for the discovery of Command Injection Vulnerabilities](https://hexdocs.pm/sobelow/0.2.4/Sobelow.CI.html#content)
 
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