Merge pull request #10665 from ethereum/wallet-page

Fixes to wallet pages

Author: minimalsm

redirects.json

@@ -338,5 +338,9 @@
   {
     "fromPath": "/*/staking/withdraws",
     "toPath": "/:splat/staking/withdrawals/"
+  },
+  {
+    "fromPath": "/*/guides/how-to-register-an-ethereum-account",
+    "toPath": "/:splat/guides/how-to-create-an-ethereum-account/"
   }
 ]

src/content/guides/how-to-create-an-ethereum-account/index.md

@@ -4,37 +4,39 @@ description: A step-by-step guide on Ethereum account creation using a wallet.
 lang: en
 ---
 
-# How to "register" an Ethereum account
+# How to create an Ethereum account
 
-Anyone can create an Ethereum account for free with a specific type of app commonly known as a wallet. Wallets create and secure the keys that let you hold, send and receive crypto. You can also connect to projects on Ethereum that will let you trade NFTs, exchange tokens, access games, and much more.
+Anyone can create an Ethereum account at any time, for free. There are several ways, but the easiest and most common way is to use an app known as a wallet. Wallets create and secure the keys that enable you to use Ethereum. You can use your wallet to send transactions, check your token balances and connect to apps built on Ethereum, such as token exchanges, games, NFT marketplaces and more. Some "web2" apps now allow you to sign in with Ethereum too.
 
-Unlike opening a new account with a company, creating an Ethereum account is done freely, privately and without asking permission. Accounts are controlled by keys that your wallet software helps you create, and are not issued by a third party, nor stored in a central registry.
+Unlike opening a new account with a company, creating an Ethereum account is done freely, privately and without requiring permission. Accounts are controlled by keys that your wallet software helps you create, and are not issued by a third party, nor stored in a central registry.
 
-## Step 1: Browse our list of wallets
+## Step 1: Choose a wallet
 
-A wallet is like an online bank account for Ethereum. There are dozens of different wallets to choose from—mobile, desktop, or even browser extensions. Our curated list of trusted wallets is a good place to start.
+A wallet is an app that helps you manage your Ethereum account. It uses your keys to send and receive transactions and sign in to apps. There are dozens of different wallets to choose from—mobile, desktop, or even browser extensions.
 
 <ButtonLink to="/wallets/find-wallet/">
   Find a wallet
 </ButtonLink>
 
-## Step 2: Choose a wallet that suits your needs
+If you are new, you can select the “New to crypto” filter on the "find a wallet" page to identify wallets that should include all necessary features suitable for beginners. 
 
-If you are new, you can activate the “New to crypto” filter to view only those wallets that include all the necessary features we think would be particularly suitable for beginners. There are also other profile filters to cater to your needs.
+![filter selection on 'find a wallet' page](./wallet-box.png)
 
-## Step 3: Download and install your wallet app
+There are also other profile filters to cater to your needs. These are examples of commonly used wallets - you should do your own research before trusting any software.
+
+## Step 2: Download and install your wallet app
 
 Once you have decided on a specific wallet, visit their official website or app store, download and install it. All of them should be free.
 
-## Step 4: Open the app and generate or import your Ethereum account
+## Step 3: Open the app and generate or import your Ethereum account
 
 The first time you open your new wallet you might be asked to choose between creating a new account or importing an existing one. Click on the new account creation.
 
-## Step 5: Store your recovery phrase
+## Step 4: Store your recovery phrase
 
-Some apps will request you to save a secret recovery phrase. Keeping this secret recovery phrase safe is extremely important! Any person who knows this secret recovery phrase can take control of all your accounts generated by these words. Never share this with anyone. This phrase should contain 12 to 24 randomly generated words (the order of the words matters).
+Some apps will request you to save a secret 'seed phrase' (you might also see this referred to as a "recovery phrase" or a "mnemonic"). Keeping this seed phrase safe is extremely important! The seed phrase is used to generate a secret key for an account which can be used to sign and send transactions. Any person who knows the seed phrase can take control of all the accounts generated by it. Never share the seed phrase with anyone. The seed phrase should contain 12 to 24 randomly generated words (the order of the words matters).
 
-Once you have saved your recovery phrase you should see your wallet dashboard with your balance. Check out our guide: [how to use a wallet.](/guides/how-to-use-a-wallet)
+Once you have saved your seed phrase you should see your wallet dashboard with your balance. Check out our guide: [how to use a wallet.](/guides/how-to-use-a-wallet)
 
  <br />
 
@@ -49,20 +51,22 @@ Once you have saved your recovery phrase you should see your wallet dashboard wi
 
 ### Are my wallet and my Ethereum account the same?
 
-No, just like online banking you can have many different accounts all stored in one wallet application. Your 12 or 24 word phrase secures them all: it is like the seed of a big tree (which is why you must keep it safe). Each branch of the tree holds a key, and every key is one of your accounts. If you lose access to the wallet (i.e. your tree gets cut down), you can always restore all your different accounts using other software and the same seed (which will always grow the same tree).
+No. The wallet is a management tool that helps you to manage accounts. A single wallet might give access to several accounts, and a single account can be accessed by multiple wallets. The seed phrase is used to create accounts that are then controlled by the wallet. 
+
+You can think of the accounts as leaves on a tree that all 'grow' from a single seed phrase. Each unique seed will grow an entirely different tree of accounts.
 
 ### Can I send bitcoin to an Ethereum address, or ether to a Bitcoin address?
 
 No, you cannot. Bitcoin and ether exist on two separate networks (i.e. different blockchains), each with their own bookkeeping models and address formats. There have been various attempts to bridge the two different networks, of which the most active one is currently [Wrapped bitcoin or WBTC](https://www.bitcoin.com/get-started/what-is-wbtc/). This is not an endorsement, as WBTC is a custodial solution (meaning a single group of people controls certain critical functions) and is provided here for informational purposes only.
 
 ### If I own an ETH address, do I own the same address on other blockchains?
 
-You can use the same address on all EVM compatible blockchains (if you have the type of wallet with a recovery phrase). This [list](https://chainlist.org/) will show you which blockchains you can use with the same address. Some blockchains, like Bitcoin, implement a completely separate set of network rules and you will need a different address with a different format. If you have a smart contract wallet you should check its product website for more info on which blockchains are supported.
+You can use the same address on all blockchains that use similar underlying software to Ethereum (known as 'EVM-compatible'). This [list](https://chainlist.org/) will show you which blockchains you can use with the same address. Some blockchains, like Bitcoin, implement a completely separate set of network rules and you will need a different address with a different format. If you have a smart contract wallet you should check its product website for more info on which blockchains are supported.
 
 ### Is having my own wallet safer than keeping my funds on an exchange?
 
-Yes, this is a much safer option because nobody else will have access to your funds. There are unfortunately many examples of failed exchanges that filed for bankruptcy resulting in users' losing their savings which were being held in custody. Hacks, frozen accounts, or blocked withdrawals are some other common risks. Owning a wallet (with a recovery phrase) is the best way to safeguard your assets. Nonetheless, a poorly backed-up recovery phrase potentially exposes you to more risks as compared to having your keys managed by an exchange. Make sure to store your recovery phrase well.
+Having your own wallet means you take responsibility for the security of your assets. There are unfortunately many examples of failed exchanges that lost their customers' money. Owning a wallet (with a seed phrase) removes the risk associated with trusting some entity to hold your assets. However, you have to secure your own keys and avoid phishing scams, accidentally approving transactions or exposing keys, interacting with fake websites and other self-custody risks. The risks and benefits are different.
 
 ### If I lose my phone/hardware wallet, do I need to use the same wallet app again to recover the lost funds?
 
-No, you can use almost any wallet as the recovery process is largely standardized. This means that you can put the same 12 or 24 word phrase into most wallets and they will restore your same account. Be careful if you ever need to do this: it is best to make sure you are not connected to the internet when recovering your wallet so that your recovery phrase is not accidentally leaked. It is often impossible to recover lost funds without the recovery phrase.
+No, you can use a different wallet. As long as you have the seed phrase you can enter it into most wallets and they will restore your account. Be careful if you ever need to do this: it is best to make sure you are not connected to the internet when recovering your wallet so that your seed phrase is not accidentally leaked. It is often impossible to recover lost funds without the seed phrase.

src/content/guides/how-to-create-an-ethereum-account/wallet-box.png

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ lang: en
 
 # How to use a wallet
 
-Learn how to operate all the basic functions of a wallet. If you don’t have one yet, check out our [How to: "Register" an Ethereum account](/guides/how-to-register-an-ethereum-account/).
+Learn how to operate all the basic functions of a wallet. If you don’t have one yet, check out our [How to: create an Ethereum account](/guides/how-to-create-an-ethereum-account/).
 
 ## Open your wallet
 
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ Do you want to receive crypto into your wallet?
 
 Each Ethereum account has its own receiving address which is a unique sequence of numbers and letters. The address functions like a bank account number. Ethereum addresses will always start with “0x”. You can share this address with anyone: it is safe to do so.
 
-Your address (which is sometimes called a "public key") is like your home address: you need to tell people what it is so they can find you. It is safe to do this, because you can still lock your front door with another key only you control so that no-one can get in, even if they know where you live.
+Your address is like your home address: you need to tell people what it is so they can find you. It is safe to do this, because you can still lock your front door with another key only you control so that no-one can get in, even if they know where you live.
 
 You need to provide whoever wants to send you money with your public address. Many wallet apps let you copy your address or show a QR code to scan for easier usage. Avoid typing any Ethereum address manually. This can easily lead to clerical errors and lost funds.
 

src/content/guides/how-to-use-a-wallet/index.md

@@ -1,20 +1,20 @@
 {
-  "page-wallets-accounts-addresses": "Wallets, accounts, and addresses",
+  "page-wallets-accounts-addresses": "Wallets, accounts, keys and addresses",
   "page-wallets-accounts-addresses-desc": "It's worth understanding the differences between some key terms.",
-  "page-wallets-accounts-ethereum-addresses": "An Ethereum account has an Ethereum address, like an inbox has an email address. You can use this to send funds to an account.",
+  "page-wallets-accounts-ethereum-addresses": "An Ethereum account has an address, like an inbox has an email address. This is used to identify your digital assets.",
   "page-wallets-alt": "Illustration of a robot with a vault for a body, representing an Ethereum wallet",
-  "page-wallets-ethereum-account": "An Ethereum account is an entity that can send transactions and has a balance.",
+  "page-wallets-ethereum-account": "An Ethereum account is a pair of keys. One key is used to create the address you can share freely, and the other key you need to keep secret because it's used to sign things. Together, these keys let you hold assets and make transactions.",
   "page-wallets-blog": "Coinbase blog",
   "page-wallets-bookmarking": "Bookmark your wallet",
   "page-wallets-bookmarking-desc": "If you use a web wallet, bookmark the site to protect yourself against phishing scams.",
   "page-wallets-cd": "Physical hardware wallets are devices that let you keep your crypto offline – very secure",
-  "page-wallets-desc-2": "You need a wallet to send funds and manage your ETH.",
+  "page-wallets-desc-2": "Wallets are what most people use to handle their digital assets and identity.",
   "page-wallets-desc-2-link": "More on ETH",
-  "page-wallets-desc-3": "Your wallet is only a tool for managing your Ethereum account. That means you can swap wallet providers at any time. Many wallets also let you manage several Ethereum accounts from one application.",
-  "page-wallets-desc-4": "That's because wallets don't have custody of your funds, you do. They're just a tool for managing what's really yours.",
-  "page-wallets-description": "Ethereum wallets are applications that let you interact with your Ethereum account. Think of it like an internet banking app – without the bank. Your wallet lets you read your balance, send transactions and connect to applications.",
+  "page-wallets-desc-3": "Your wallet is a tool for interacting with your Ethereum account. That means you can swap wallet providers at any time. Many wallets also let you manage several Ethereum accounts from one application.",
+  "page-wallets-desc-4": "Wallet providers don't have custody of your funds. They just provide you a window to see your assets on Ethereum and tools to easily manage them.",
+  "page-wallets-description": "Ethereum wallets are applications that give you control over your account. Just like your physical wallet, it contains everything you need to prove your identity and handle your assets. Your wallet allows you to sign in to applications, read your balance, send transactions and verify your identity.",
   "page-wallets-desktop": "Desktop applications if you prefer to manage your funds via macOS, Windows or Linux",
-  "page-wallets-ethereum-wallet": "A wallet is a product that lets you manage your Ethereum account. It allows you to view your account balance, send transactions, and more.",
+  "page-wallets-ethereum-wallet": "A wallet is a tool that lets you interact with your account, using your keys. It allows you to view your account balance, send transactions, and more.",
   "page-wallets-explore": "Explore Ethereum",
   "page-wallets-features-desc": "We can help you choose your wallet based on the features you care about.",
   "page-wallets-features-title": "Compare wallets based on features",
@@ -39,12 +39,12 @@
   "page-wallets-seed-phrase-example": "Here's an example:",
   "page-wallets-seed-phrase-snippet": "there aeroplane curve vent formation doge possible product distinct under spirit lamp",
   "page-wallets-seed-phrase-write-down": "Don’t store it on a computer. Write it down and keep it safe.",
-  "page-wallets-slogan": "The key to your digital future",
+  "page-wallets-slogan": "Holding the keys to your digital future",
   "page-wallets-stay-safe": "How to stay safe",
-  "page-wallets-stay-safe-desc": "Wallets require a bit of a different mindset when it comes to safety. Financial freedom and the ability to access and use funds anywhere comes with a bit of responsibility – there’s no customer support in crypto.",
-  "page-wallets-subtitle": "Wallets give access to your funds and Ethereum applications. Only you should have access to your wallet.",
+  "page-wallets-stay-safe-desc": "Financial freedom and the ability to access and use funds anywhere comes with responsibility – there’s no customer support in crypto. You are responsible for keeping your keys safe and secure.",
+  "page-wallets-subtitle": "Wallets help you access your digital assets and sign in to applications.",
   "page-wallets-take-responsibility": "Take responsibility for your own funds",
-  "page-wallets-take-responsibility-desc": "Centralized exchanges will link your wallet to a username and password that you can recover in a traditional way. Just remember you’re trusting that exchange with custody over your funds. If that company is attacked or folds, your funds are at risk.",
+  "page-wallets-take-responsibility-desc": "Centralized exchanges will link your wallet to a username and password that you can recover in a traditional way. Just remember you’re trusting that exchange with custody over your funds. If the exchange has financial trouble, your funds would be risk.",
   "page-wallets-tips": "More tips on staying safe",
   "page-wallets-tips-community": "From the community",
   "page-wallets-title": "Ethereum wallets",
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
   "page-wallets-your-ethereum-account": "Your Ethereum account",
   "page-wallets-your-ethereum-account-desc": "Your wallet is your window into your Ethereum account – your balance, transaction history and more. But you can swap wallet providers at any time.",
   "page-wallets-your-login": "Your login for Ethereum apps",
-  "page-wallets-your-login-desc": "Your wallet lets you connect to any decentralized application using your Ethereum account. It's like a login you can use across many dapps.",
-  "additional-reading-how-to-register-an-ethereum-account": "How to \"register\" an Ethereum account",
+  "page-wallets-your-login-desc": "Your wallet lets you connect to applications using your Ethereum account. It's like a login you can use across many apps.",
+  "additional-reading-how-to-create-an-ethereum-account": "How to create an Ethereum account",
   "additional-reading-how-to-use-a-wallet": "How to use a wallet"
 }

src/intl/en/page-wallets.json

@@ -162,9 +162,9 @@ const articles = [
 const guides = [
   {
     title: (
-      <Translation id="additional-reading-how-to-register-an-ethereum-account" />
+      <Translation id="additional-reading-how-to-create-an-ethereum-account" />
     ),
-    link: "/guides/how-to-register-an-ethereum-account/",
+    link: "/guides/how-to-create-an-ethereum-account/",
   },
   {
     title: <Translation id="additional-reading-how-to-use-a-wallet" />,