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Co-authored-by: Craig Norris <[email protected]>
Signed-off-by: Lynette  Miles <[email protected]>

Author: esmerel

about/fluentd-and-fluent-bit.md

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 # Fluentd and Fluent Bit
 
-Telemetry data processing can be complex, especially at scale. That's why [Fluentd](https://www.fluentd.org) was created. Fluentd is more than a basic tool, it's grown into a full-scale ecosystem that contains SDKs for different languages and sub-projects like [Fluent Bit](https://fluentbit.io).
+Telemetry data processing can be complex, especially at scale. That's why [Fluentd](https://www.fluentd.org) was created. Fluentd is more than a basic tool. It's grown into a full-scale ecosystem that contains SDKs for different languages and sub-projects, like [Fluent Bit](https://fluentbit.io).
 
 The Fluentd and Fluent Bit projects are both:
 
 - Licensed under the terms of Apache License v2.0.
 - Graduated hosted projects by the [Cloud Native Computing Foundation (CNCF)](https://cncf.io).
-- Production grade solutions: Deployed millions of times every single day.
+- Production-grade solutions, that are deployed millions of times every single day.
 - Vendor neutral and community driven.
-- Widely adopted by the industry: Trusted by major companies like AWS, Microsoft, Google Cloud, and hundreds of others.
+- Widely adopted by the industry, being trusted by major companies like Amazon, Microsoft, Google, and hundreds of others.
 
 The projects have many similarities: [Fluent Bit](https://fluentbit.io) is designed and built on top of the best ideas of [Fluentd](https://www.fluentd.org) architecture and general design. Which one you choose depends on your end-users' needs.