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docs/intro/glossary.md

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#### Electrolyzer
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An device that converts water into hydrogen and oxygen.
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A device that converts water into hydrogen and oxygen.
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#### Grid
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A numeric identifier uniquely representing an instance of a [component](#component) in a particular[microgrid](#microgrid). It is always of type `int`.
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For example, a battery an have a component ID **5**.
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For example, a battery with a component ID of **5**.
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This indicator is crucial to ensure that charge or discharge power remains within specific limits, optimizing the battery's lifespan. It is particularly useful in peak power applications to define battery conditions for substantial charges or discharges.
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The state of power depends on the state of charge, battery capacity, initial characteristics, chemistry, and battery voltage. [Source](https://epicpower.es/wp-content/uploads/2020/08/AN028_SoC-SoH-SoP-definitions_v3.pdf)
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The state of power depends on the state of charge, battery capacity, initial characteristics, chemistry, and battery voltage, as well as external factors like temperature and humidity, which can also have a significant impact on it. [Source](https://epicpower.es/wp-content/uploads/2020/08/AN028_SoC-SoH-SoP-definitions_v3.pdf)

docs/intro/index.md

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diving into the Frequenz SDK. These concepts encompass both general notions
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within the energy sector or microgrids and specific details regarding the SDK
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itself, such as asynchronous programming, use of channels for communication,
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the actor model, data flow, and the composition of a component graph.
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the actor model, data pipelines, and the composition of a components graph.
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Given that users may possess diverse backgrounds and varying levels of
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familiarity with these subjects, the left menu is organized into sections, each

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