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docs/user-guide/microgrid-concepts.md

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## Frequenz SDK Microgrid Model
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The SDK aims to provide an abstract model of the microgrid that allows
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for high-level interactions with {{glossary("component", "microgrid
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components")}}, without having to deal with, or even be aware of
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location specific details like:
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The SDK aims to provide an abstract model of the microgrid that
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enables high-level interactions with {{glossary("component",
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"microgrid components")}}, without having to worry about (or even be
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aware of) location-specific details such as:
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- where the {{glossary("meter", "meters")}} are placed,
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- how many {{glossary("battery", "batteries")}},
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power flowing through this connection can be streamed through
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[`grid_power`][frequenz.sdk.timeseries.logical_meter.LogicalMeter.grid_power].
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In locations without a grid connection, this method would still be
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available, and would stream zero values.
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In locations without a grid connection, this method remains
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accessible, and streams zero values.
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## Consumer
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[`consumer_power`][frequenz.sdk.timeseries.logical_meter.LogicalMeter.consumer_power]
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If there is no consumer at a site, this method would stream zero values.
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## Producers: PV Arrays, CHP
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And just like the other methods, if components of either of these
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types are not available in a microgrid, the corrensponding methods
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will stream zero values.
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As is the case with the other methods, if PV Arrays or CHPs are not
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available in a microgrid, the corresponding methods stream zero
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## Batteries
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[`set_bounds`][frequenz.sdk.timeseries.ev_charger_pool.EVChargerPool.set_bounds]
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method for limit the charge power of individual EV Chargers.
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method to limit the charge power of individual EV Chargers.

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