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Wrong Idiom
The idiom "on the other hand" does not work here.
First, it requires the use of "on one hand" prior.
Secondly, this is not an appropriate use of the idiom. "In contrast" seems more coherent and clear in this context.1 parent b0c2210 commit 4ce0b1a
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