Update docs/platforms/javascript/common/tracing/span-metrics/examples.mdx

Co-authored-by: Alex Krawiec <[email protected]>

Author: codyde

docs/platforms/javascript/common/tracing/span-metrics/examples.mdx

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Example Repository: [Crash Commerce](https://github.com/getsentry/crash-commerce
 
 **The Challenge:** Capture end-to-end checkout flow, understand average cart size and value, diagnose performance of payment providers across the frontend and the server API.
 
-**Solution:** Start a client span on the checkout action for the application, and relevant spans on the backend for each step in the checkout flow. Attach attributes that represent critical metrics for the application, such as cart size and value, and payment provider used in the transaction.
+**The Solution:** Start a client span on the checkout action and relevant spans on the backend for each step in the checkout flow. Attach attributes that represent critical metrics for the application, such as cart size, cart value, and the payment provider used in the transaction.
 
 **Frontend (React) - instrument the Checkout click handler:**