Update includes/platforms/configuration/options/thread-locality.mdx

Co-authored-by: Liza Mock <[email protected]>

Author: jamescrosswell

includes/platforms/configuration/options/thread-locality.mdx

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-If you are curious about how thread locality works for scope data, in .NET, there
-are two modes for managing "ambient data". Usuaully Sentry will automatically choose the
-most appropriate mode for your application type, however this can be overridden by
-setting [`SentryOptions.IsGlobalModeEnabled`](../../configuration/options/#is-global-mode-enabled) manually.
+Read on if you're curious to know how thread locality works for scope data. In .NET, there
+are two modes for managing ambient data (which is data that's available in different parts of an application and doesn't need to be passed explicitly through method arguments): a disabled global mode and an enabled global mode. Usually, Sentry will automatically choose the most appropriate mode for your application type. However, this can be overridden by setting [`SentryOptions.IsGlobalModeEnabled`](../../configuration/options/#is-global-mode-enabled) manually.
 
 If global mode is disabled (appropriate for most server-based applications), the
-ambient scope data is stored as an `AsyncLocal` and so it will flow with the execution
+ambient scope data will be stored as an `AsyncLocal` and will flow with the execution
 context. Stephen Toub's blog post on [ExecutionContext vs SynchronizationContext](https://devblogs.microsoft.com/pfxteam/executioncontext-vs-synchronizationcontext/)
 explains that concept in more detail.
 
-If global mode is enabled (appropriate for desktop applications), ambient scope data is
+If global mode is enabled (appropriate for desktop applications), ambient scope data will be
 stored as a Singleton and available globally. This means you can set context (such as
 the user logged into the application) once and it will be sent with all events, regardless
 of whether the event was captured on the UI thread or a background thread.