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Co-authored-by: Liza Mock <[email protected]>

Author: vaind

docs/platforms/flutter/session-replay/index.mdx

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 title: Set Up Session Replay
 sidebar_order: 5500
 notSupported:
-description: "Learn how to enable the Beta of Mobile Session Replay in your app."
+description: "Learn how to enable the Mobile Session Replay Beta in your app."
 ---
 
 <Note>
@@ -27,9 +27,9 @@ dependencies:
   sentry_flutter: ^8.9.0
 ```
 
-## Set Up
+## Setup
 
-To set up the integration, add the following to your Sentry initialization.
+To set up the integration, add the following to your Sentry initialization:
 
 ```dart
 await SentryFlutter.init(
@@ -53,13 +53,13 @@ Once testing is complete, **we recommend lowering this value in production**. We
 Sampling allows you to control how much of your website's traffic will result in a Session Replay. There are two sample rates you can adjust to get the replays relevant to you:
 
 1. <PlatformIdentifier name="replays-session-sample-rate" /> - The sample rate for
-   replays that begin recording immediately and last the entirety of the user's session.
+   replays that begin recording immediately and last the entirety of a user's session.
 2. <PlatformIdentifier name="replays-on-error-sample-rate" /> - The sample rate for
    replays that are recorded when an error happens. This type of replay will record
    up to a minute of events prior to the error and continue recording until the session
    ends.
 
-Sampling begins as soon as a session starts. <PlatformIdentifier name="replays-session-sample-rate" /> is evaluated first. If it's sampled, the replay recording will begin. Otherwise, <PlatformIdentifier name="replays-on-error-sample-rate" /> is evaluated and if it's sampled, the integration will begin buffering the replay and will only upload it to Sentry if an error occurs. The remainder of the replay will behave similarly to a whole-session replay.
+Sampling starts as soon as a session begins. The <PlatformIdentifier name="replays-session-sample-rate" /> is then evaluated. If the session is sampled, replay recording will start immediately. If not, <PlatformIdentifier name="replays-on-error-sample-rate" /> will be evaluated. If the session is sampled at this point, the replay will be buffered and will only be uploaded to Sentry if an error occurs. 
 
 ## Privacy
 
@@ -77,11 +77,11 @@ or you can even have a callback to decide whether a specific widget instance sho
               : SentryMaskingDecision.continueProcessing);
 ```
 
-You can find more details in respective methods' code documentation.
+You can find more details in the documentation for each method.
 
 <Note>
 
-If you encounter any data not being redacted with the default settings, please let us know through a [GitHub issue](https://github.com/getsentry/sentry-dart/issues/new?template=BUG_REPORT.yml).
+If you find that data isn't being redacted with the default settings, please let us know by creating a [GitHub issue](https://github.com/getsentry/sentry-dart/issues/new?template=BUG_REPORT.yml).
 
 </Note>
 

docs/product/explore/session-replay/mobile/index.mdx

@@ -56,9 +56,9 @@ These breadcrumbs are synced with the replay player and will auto-scroll as the
 
 ## SDKs Supported
 
-Session Replay for mobile is currently available for Android and iOS on both native SDKs as well as React Native and Flutter.
+Session Replay for mobile is currently available for Android and iOS on both native SDKs, as well as for React Native and Flutter.
 
-We recommend updating to the latest, but the miminum versions supported are:
+We recommend updating to the latest version, but the minimum versions supported are:
 
 - [iOS](/platforms/apple/guides/ios/session-replay/), [8.31.1](https://github.com/getsentry/sentry-cocoa/releases)
 - [Android](/platforms/android/session-replay/), [7.12.0](https://github.com/getsentry/sentry-java/releases)