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Co-authored-by: Shannon Anahata <[email protected]>

Author: armcknight

docs/platforms/apple/common/profiling/index.mdx

@@ -133,13 +133,13 @@ Every time `SentrySDK.startWithOptions` is called with app start profiling confi
 
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-Profiling configuration as explained below was originally introduced in SDK version `8.12.0` and is deprecated in favor of profiling V2 introduced in 8.49.0, explained at the beginning of this section.
+Profiling configuration, explained below, was originally introduced in SDK version `8.12.0`. It is now deprecated in favor of profiling V2, introduced in 8.49.0.
 
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 <Alert>
 
-Profiling depends on Sentry’s Tracing product being enabled beforehand. Check out the <PlatformLink to="/tracing/">tracing setup documentation</PlatformLink> for more detailed information on how to configure sampling.
+Profiling depends on Sentry’s Tracing product being enabled beforehand. Check out the <PlatformLink to="/tracing/">tracing setup documentation</PlatformLink> for detailed information on how to configure sampling.
 
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@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ SentrySDK.start { options in
 
 <Alert>
 
-Launch profiling configuration as explained below was originally introduced in SDK version 8.21.0 and is deprecated in favor of profiling V2 configuration released in 8.49.0, explained at the beginning of this section.
+Launch profiling configuration, explained below, was originally introduced in SDK version 8.21.0. It is now deprecated in favor of profiling V2 configuration, released in 8.49.0.
 
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@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ SentrySDK.start { options in
 
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-Continuous profiling as explained below was originally introduced in SDK version 8.36.0 and is deprecated in favor of profiling V2 configuration released in 8.49.0, explained at the beginning of this section.
+Continuous profiling, explained below, was originally introduced in SDK version 8.36.0. It is now deprecated in favor of profiling V2 configuration, released in 8.49.0.
 
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