Update docs/product/crons/monitor-details.mdx

Author: lizokm

docs/product/crons/monitor-details.mdx

@@ -68,11 +68,11 @@ You can delete a monitor from the monitor details page.
 
 ## Multiple Environments
 
-A monitor can be configured with multiple environments, with all environments running with the same schedule. Only environments with at least one check-in will be displayed and made available for alerting and filtering.
+A monitor can be configured to run across multiple environments, all following the same schedule. However, only environments with at least one check-in will appear and be available for alerting and filtering.
 
-Although the schedule of check-ins of all environments are the same, the environment state and check-ins are independent of each other. This means that a missed or failed check-in in one environment will not affect the state of other environments.
+Although the check-in schedule is the same across all environments, each environment operates independently. This ensures that a missed or failed check-in in one environment won't impact the state of other environments.
 
-If you're using one of Crons' [supported SDKs](/product/crons/getting-started/), the check-in environment will be automatically set to the environment configured in the SDK. If you're using the API, you can set the environment in the check-in payload.
+If you're using [an SDK that supports Crons](/product/crons/getting-started/), the check-in environment will be automatically set to the environment configured in the SDK. If you're using the API, you can set the environment in the check-in payload.
 
 ## Environment State