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Co-authored-by: Liza Mock <[email protected]>

Author: brustolin

docs/platforms/apple/guides/ios/session-replay/customredact.mdx

@@ -1,33 +1,33 @@
 ---
-title: Using custom redact for Session Replay
+title: Using Custom Redact for Session Replay
 sidebar_order: 5501
 notSupported:
-description: "Learn how to choose which part of your app's data to redact in Session Replay."
+description: "Learn how to redact parts of your app's data in Session Replay."
 ---
 
-<Note>
+<Alert>
 
-Using custom redaction for Session Replay can expose sensitive data. Make sure to double-check every part of your app's data that you choose to redact or not.
+If you custom redact your Session Replays, you may accidentally expose sensitive customer data. Be sure to double-check what you choose to expose.
 
-</Note>
+</Alert>
 
-By default, our Session Replay SDK masks all text content, images, and user input, giving you heightened confidence that no sensitive data will leave the device. However, you can choose which parts of your app's data to redact or not by using some different options.
+By default, our Session Replay SDK masks all text content, images, and user input. This helps ensure that no sensitive data will be exposed. You can also manually choose which parts of your app's data to redact by using the different options listed below.
 
 
-## Redact by View class
+## Redact by View Class
 
 You can choose which type of view you want to redact or ignore by using the `redactViewClasses` or `ignoreViewClasses` options.
 
-Let's say you have a custom view that you want to redact and a UILabel subclass (which normally would be redacted) that you want to ignore. You can set the options like this:
+Let's say you have a custom view that you want to redact and a `UILabel` subclass (which normally would be redacted) that you want to ignore. You can set the options like this:
 
 ```swift
   options.experimental.sessionReplay.redactViewClasses = [MyCustomView.self]
   options.experimental.sessionReplay.ignoreViewClasses = [MyCustomLabel.self]
 ```
 
-## Redact View by instance
+## Redact by View Instance
 
-You can also choose to redact or ignore a specific view instance by using the replay API or view extensions like this:
+You can also choose to redact or ignore a specific view instance by using the [replay API](/api/replays/) or view extensions like this:
 
 ```swift
   SentrySDK.replay.redactView(view: view)
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ In order to control the SwiftUI redact process, you first need to disable the de
     options.experimental.sessionReplay.redactAllImages = false
 ```
 
-Then you can manually choose which `View` you want to redact with the `replayRedact` modifier
+Then you can manually choose which `View` you want to redact with the `replayRedact` modifier:
 
 ```swift    
     var body: some View {
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ Then you can manually choose which `View` you want to redact with the `replayRed
 ```
 
 <Note>
-Dissabling the default redaction options will expose all text and images in the session replay. 
+Disabling the default redaction options will expose all text and images in the session replay. 
 Make sure to redact them manually.
 </Note>
 

docs/platforms/apple/guides/ios/session-replay/index.mdx

@@ -73,9 +73,9 @@ Sampling begins as soon as a session starts. `sessionSampleRate` is evaluated fi
 
 ## Privacy
 
-The SDK is recording and aggressively redacting all text and images. 
+The SDK aggressively records and redacts all text and images. 
 Please don't turn it off if you have sensitive data in your app. 
-If you want to manually choose which part of your app's data to redact, read our guide on [custom redaction](/platforms/apple/guides/ios/session-replay/customredact).
+If you want to manually redact parts of your app's data, read our guide on [custom redaction](/platforms/apple/guides/ios/session-replay/customredact).
 
 <Note>