Update control-offboarding.md for clarity (#58236)

Co-authored-by: Copilot <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: mc <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Raymond Tiu <[email protected]>

Author: 4 people

content/admin/enforcing-policies/enforcing-policies-for-your-enterprise/control-offboarding.md

@@ -14,14 +14,17 @@ type: how_to
 
 By default, when a user loses access to all organizations in your enterprise, the user remains in your enterprise as an unaffiliated user. This can happen when you remove a user from organizations explicitly or remove an organization from your enterprise.
 
-Unaffiliated users retain team membership, enterprise roles, and {% data variables.product.prodname_copilot %} licenses granted directly from the enterprise account.
+Unaffiliated users retain enterprise-level team membership, enterprise roles, and {% data variables.product.prodname_copilot %} licenses granted directly from the enterprise account.
 
-You can set a policy to instead remove users from the enterprise completely when they are removed from every organization. Removed users will lose all privileges and licenses granted from the enterprise. This is useful if you have an offboarding process that depends on removing users from organizations, for example using team synchronization from an identity provider.
+You can set a policy to instead remove users from the enterprise completely when they are removed from every organization. Removed users will lose all privileges and licenses granted from the enterprise. This is useful if your enterprise offboarding process involves removing users from organizations, whether through organization-level SCIM deprovisioning, the GitHub web UI, or a non-SCIM REST API endpoint. For more information, see the link that corresponds to your use case:
+- [AUTOTITLE](/organizations/managing-saml-single-sign-on-for-your-organization/about-scim-for-organizations)
+- [Revoking the user's membership](/organizations/managing-membership-in-your-organization/removing-a-member-from-your-organization#revoking-the-users-membership)
+- [Remove organization membership for a user](/rest/orgs/members?apiVersion=2022-11-28#remove-organization-membership-for-a-user) in the REST API documentation.
 
 This policy:
 
-* Applies regardless of how users lose their organization membership (through direct removal, a team, or removing an organization).
-* Does **not** apply to users with the enterprise owner or enterprise billing manager role. These users remain in the enterprise regardless of their organization membership and the policy setting.
+* Applies regardless of how users are removed from an organization.
+* Does **not** apply to users with the enterprise owner or enterprise billing manager role. These users remain in the enterprise regardless of their organization membership and the policy setting. For more details on how to remove an enterprise owner or enterprise billing manager from the enterprise, see [AUTOTITLE](/admin/managing-accounts-and-repositories/managing-users-in-your-enterprise/removing-a-member-from-your-enterprise#removing-a-member-from-your-enterprise) and [AUTOTITLE](/admin/managing-accounts-and-repositories/managing-users-in-your-enterprise/inviting-people-to-manage-your-enterprise#removing-an-enterprise-administrator-from-your-enterprise-account).
 
 ## Setting the policy