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<section class="hero overview">
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<h2>Kit</h2>
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<p>Open source training content</p>
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<h2>Training Kit</h2>
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<p>Open source GitHub courseware</p>
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<h4>Present your way to better version control</h4>
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<p>With our open source Git &amp; GitHub teaching materials, you can teach yourself or your audience, right from your browser</p>
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<p>With our open source Git &amp; GitHub teaching materials, you can teach yourself or an audience, right from the convenience of your web browser</p>
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We've created a slide deck for each class we offer.
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Just launch any class and teach from the web browser.
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We've created a combination of a slide deck, lecture, and labs for each class we offer.
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Just launch any class and click the right-side TOC navigation to jump to a section.
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<h3>Foundations</h3>
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<p>Plug-in to the core skills of day-to-day use with the GitHub platform, Git clients, and workflows.</p>
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<p>Gain core GitHub skills for day-to-day use of the GitHub platform, Git clients, and standard workflows.</p>
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<h3>Intermediate</h3>
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<p>Explore fundamental command line skills using Git on the command line and problem solving concepts.</p>
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<p>Explore fundamental Git command line skills and problem solutions to creating history, effectively branching, and reverting when necessary.</p>
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<p>Take a closer examination of Git on the command line, problem solving techniques, and GitHub efficiencies.</p>
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<p>Gain a deeper understanding of Git's command line and its interaction with the GitHub platform for advanced problem solving techniques and efficiencies in using GitHub.</p>
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<h4>Cheat Sheets</h4>
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<p>Looking for a quick reference sheet of Git commands? We've got just the document, available for download in these languages:</p>
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<p>Looking for a quick reference sheet of Git commands? We've got just the document for you. It's available for PDF-format download in the following languages:</p>
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<a href="downloads/github-git-cheat-sheet.pdf" class="bubble">English</a>
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<a href="downloads/es/github-git-cheat-sheet.pdf" class="bubble">Spanish</a>

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