Update page to align with page removal standard

Author: eread

doc/settings/grafana.md

@@ -2,11 +2,14 @@
 stage: Systems
 group: Distribution
 info: To determine the technical writer assigned to the Stage/Group associated with this page, see https://about.gitlab.com/handbook/product/ux/technical-writing/#assignments
+remove_date: '2023-08-23'
+redirect_to: 'https://docs.gitlab.com/ee/administration/monitoring/performance/grafana_configuration.html#deprecation-of-bundled-grafana'
 ---
 
-# Grafana Dashboard Service (deprecated)
+# Grafana dashboard service (removed)
 
-> - [Introduced](https://gitlab.com/gitlab-org/omnibus-gitlab/-/issues/3487) in GitLab 11.9.
-> - [Deprecated](https://gitlab.com/gitlab-org/omnibus-gitlab/-/issues/7772) in GitLab 16.0.
-> - [Removed](https://gitlab.com/gitlab-org/omnibus-gitlab/-/issues/7772) in GitLab 16.3. For more information,
-    see [deprecation notes](https://docs.gitlab.com/ee/administration/monitoring/performance/grafana_configuration.html#deprecation-of-bundled-grafana).
+This feature was [deprecated](https://gitlab.com/gitlab-org/omnibus-gitlab/-/issues/7772) in GitLab 16.0 and
+[removed](https://gitlab.com/gitlab-org/omnibus-gitlab/-/issues/7772) in GitLab 16.3.
+
+For more information, see
+[deprecation notes](https://docs.gitlab.com/ee/administration/monitoring/performance/grafana_configuration.html#deprecation-of-bundled-grafana).