telemetry setting wording polish

Author: isidorn

src/vs/platform/telemetry/common/telemetryService.ts

@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ export class TelemetryService implements ITelemetryService {
 }
 
 function getTelemetryLevelSettingDescription(): string {
-	const telemetryText = localize('telemetry.telemetryLevelMd', "Controls {0} telemetry, first-party extension telemetry and participating third-party extension telemetry. Some third party extensions might not respect this setting. Consult the specific extension's documentation to be sure. This helps us better understand how {0} is performing, where improvements need to be made, and how features are being used.", product.nameLong);
+	const telemetryText = localize('telemetry.telemetryLevelMd', "Controls {0} telemetry, first-party extension telemetry and participating third-party extension telemetry. Some third party extensions might not respect this setting. Consult the specific extension's documentation to be sure. Telemetry helps us better understand how {0} is performing, where improvements need to be made, and how features are being used.", product.nameLong);
 	const externalLinksStatement = !product.privacyStatementUrl ?
 		localize("telemetry.docsStatement", "Read more about the [data we collect]({0}).", 'https://aka.ms/vscode-telemetry') :
 		localize("telemetry.docsAndPrivacyStatement", "Read more about the [data we collect]({0}) and our [privacy statement]({1}).", 'https://aka.ms/vscode-telemetry', product.privacyStatementUrl);