docs: revise based on feedback

Co-authored-by: Jillian Maroket <[email protected]>
Signed-off-by: Jack Yu <[email protected]>

Author: 2 people

docs/install/harvester-configuration.md

@@ -445,9 +445,9 @@ os:
 
 #### Definition
 
-Configuration for external storage devices, particularly for multipath storage setups. This setting enables support for external storage devices such as SAN (Storage Area Network) storage and configures multipath device handling. The multipath configuration allows you to define which devices should be blacklisted or whitelisted based on vendor, product names, or World Wide Identifiers (WWIDs).
+Setting that enables support for external storage devices (for example, storage area network (SAN) devices) that use multipath I/O (MPIO). In the multipath configuration (`multiPathConfig`), you can add devices to the blacklist and whitelist based on specific criteria: vendor, product names, or World Wide Identifiers (WWIDs).
 
-When enabled, this configuration generates the `/etc/multipath.conf` file with the specified settings to control which storage devices are managed by the multipath daemon.
+When the setting is enabled, Harvester generates the `/etc/multipath.conf` file with the specified configuration, which the multipath daemon uses to manage storage devices.
 
 #### Example
 
@@ -468,7 +468,7 @@ os:
       - "^0QEMU_QEMU_HARDDISK_disk[0-9]+"
 ```
 
-The above configuration will generate the following `/etc/multipath.conf` file:
+This configuration generates the following `/etc/multipath.conf` file:
 
 ```conf
 blacklist {

versioned_docs/version-v1.4/install/external-disk-support.md

@@ -80,9 +80,9 @@ os:
   additionalKernelArguments: "rd.iscsi.firmware vlan=enp4s0f0.2017:enp4s0f0 ip=10.115.48.10::10.115.55.254:255.255.248.0::enp4s0f0.2017:none"
 ``` 
 
-:::warning
+:::info important
 
-The `multiPathConfig` structure has changed since v1.7.0. Check the [latest configuration](/v1.7/install/harvester-configuration#osexternalstorageconfig) to set up your multipath configuration for fresh installations. This change will not impact upgrades.
+The multiPathConfig structure changed starting in v1.7.0. While this change does not affect upgrades, you must review the [`os.externalStorageConfig`](/v1.7/install/harvester-configuration#osexternalstorageconfig) documentation before performing a fresh installation of v1.7.0 or later versions.
 
 :::