Address Richard's comment re: actions vs. goals

Author: emilypi

proposals/002-text-utf-default.md

@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ to make another attempt.
 
 # Goals
 
--   Solicit feedback from community members and industry to gauge appetite for such a change.
+-   Ensure that the new design of `text` and its migration strategy accommodates the needs of community members and industry
 
 -   Provide an implementation, migration, and delivery plan for changing the default encoding of `text` from UTF-16 to UTF-8.
 
@@ -370,4 +370,4 @@ packages that go out of date.
     -   Recommendation: we must set expectations early and often throughout the implementation process. We expect there to be
         improvements to performance \*on the margins\*.
 
-    -   Note: We have made this argument, and the appetite for change did not shift, but it is still important to track.
+    -   Note: We have made this argument, and the appetite for change did not shift, but it is still important to track.