Merge pull request #1851 from hpe-dev-incubator/cms/greenlake/hpe-greenlake-cloud-platform/home

Update GreenLake “hpe-greenlake-cloud-platform/home”

Author: Didier-Lalli

content/greenlake/hpe-greenlake-cloud-platform/home.md

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-title: HPE GreenLake Cloud Platform
+title: HPE GreenLake edge-to-cloud platform
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 description: A managed cloud experience that accelerates your transformation by
   helping you to design, build, manage, and optimize your on- and off-premises
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-Powered by the HPE GreenLake edge-to-cloud platform, HPE GreenLake helps you achieve data-first modernization by bringing the cloud experience to your distributed apps and data wherever they are. With a pay per use, scalable, point & click self-service experience that is managed for you, HPE GreenLake can help you conserve your capital, reduce complexity, and achieve a faster time to market. You can run your business on HPE GreenLake.
+The HPE GreenLake platform, along with its marketplace and partner ecosystem, provides customers with a consistent, unified foundation for application development and hybrid cloud innovation. This helps customers reduce costs and complexity, while enhancing stability and performance across multiple IT environments.
 
 [Learn more about HPE GreenLake](https://www.hpe.com/us/en/greenlake.html)
 
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 ## APIs and Documentation
-HPE GreenLake customers and partners can take advantage of our well-documented, secure, and scalable framework of APIs for HPE GreenLake found in our developer portal. Learn more about the unified HPE GreenLake experience offered through the HPE GreenLake Developer Portal by clicking on the button below.
 
-[Check out the HPE GreenLake Developer Portal](https://developer.greenlake.hpe.com)
+HPE GreenLake customers and partners can take advantage of our well-documented, secure, and scalable framework of APIs for HPE GreenLake found in our developer portal. Learn more about the unified HPE GreenLake experience for developers by visiting the [HPE GreenLake Developer Portal](https://developer.greenlake.hpe.com).
 
-## Manage workloads with the HPE GreenLake edge-to-cloud platform
+## Demos and resources
 
-[Learn how with HPE GreenLake edge-to-cloud platform demos and resources](https://www.hpe.com/us/en/greenlake/demos.html)   
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+Get an overview of how you can manage workloads with the HPE GreenLake platform using our [quick demos](https://www.hpe.com/us/en/greenlake/demos.html).
 
-## Workshops-on-Demand
+## Test Drive for developers
 
+[Register for an HPE account](https://auth.hpe.com/hpe/cf/registration) and check what is available for developers in our [Test Drive](https://testdrive.greenlake.hpe.com/) platform. 
+
+## Workshops-on-Demand
 
 Take advantage of our free, Jupyter-Notebook based Workshops-on-Demand available in the [Hack Shack](https://developer.hpe.com/hackshack/). These technical workshops provide you with an in-depth, hands-on learning experience where you can interact with and learn from the experts. Designed to fit your schedule, these workshops are available 24/7 – any time, from anywhere. HPE GreenLake workshops are available today.
 
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   <a href="/hackshack/workshops"><button type="button" class="button">Try now!</button></a>
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+## Any questions on HPE GreenLake?  
 
-## Any questions on HPE GreenLake?
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-Join the [HPE Developer Community Slack Workspace](https://slack.hpedev.io/) and start a discussion in our [#HPEGreenLake](https://hpedev.slack.com/archives/C02EG5XFK8Q) channel.
+Join the [HPE Developer Community Slack Workspace](https://slack.hpedev.io/) and start a discussion in our [\#HPEGreenLake](https://hpedev.slack.com/archives/C02EG5XFK8Q) channel.