Hypermode docs review changes

Author: jacklynlee31

configure-environment.mdx

@@ -4,8 +4,7 @@ description: "Define environment parameters for your app"
 ---
 
 On your first deployment, and when you add new connections thereafter, you may
-need to adjust the configuration of your environment for your app to be ready
-for traffic.
+need to configure your environment for your app to be ready for traffic.
 
 ## Connection secrets
 

create-project.mdx

@@ -9,21 +9,21 @@ create a project through the Hypermode Console or Hyp CLI.
 ## Create with Hypermode Console
 
 <Note>
-  Hypermode relies on git as a source for project deployment. Through the
+  Hypermode relies on Git as a source for project deployment. Through the
   project creation flow, you'll connect Hypermode to your GitHub account.
 </Note>
 
 From your organization home, click **New Project**. Set a name for the project
 and click **Create**.
 
-Once you have created a project, Hypermode prompts you to import the repo with
-your Modus app. To create your first Modus app, see the
-[Modus quickstart](modus/quickstart).
+Once you have created a project, Hypermode prompts you to finish setting up your
+project using the CLI.
 
-## Import with Hyp CLI
+First, install the Modus CLI and initialize your app. For more information on
+creating your first Modus app, visit the [Modus quickstart](modus/quickstart).
 
-After you have created your Modus app, you can initialize the app with Hypermode
-through the Hyp CLI. To initialize your Hypermode project, run
+Next, initialize the app with Hypermode through the [Hyp CLI](/hyp-cli) and link
+your GitHub repo with your Modus app to Hypermode using:
 
 ```bash
 hyp link
@@ -32,3 +32,9 @@ hyp link
 This command adds a default GitHub Actions workflow to build your Modus app and
 a Hypermode GitHub app for auto-deployment. Once initialized, each commit to the
 target branch triggers a deployment.
+
+You can also connect to an existing GitHub repository.
+
+The last step is triggering your first deployment. If you linked your project
+through the Hyp CLI, make sure to push your changes first to trigger a
+deployment.

integrate-api.mdx

@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ Hypermode makes it easy to incrementally add intelligence your app.
 
 ## API endpoint
 
-You can find your project's API endpoint in the Hypermode Console in the format
-of `https://<slug>.hypermode.app/<path>`.
+You can find your project's API endpoint in the Hypermode Console, in your
+project's Home tab, in the format `https://<slug>.hypermode.app/<path>`.
 
 ## API token
 

introduction.mdx

@@ -9,10 +9,10 @@ mode: "wide"
 ## What is Hypermode? {/* <!-- vale Google.Contractions = NO --> */}
 
 Hypermode is a managed service that provides the workbench and infrastructure to
-create **powerful, engaging, and secure AI assistants, APIs, and backend
-services**.
+create **powerful, engaging, and [secure](/security) AI assistants, APIs, and
+backend services**.
 
-With every push to git, Hypermode automatically builds and deploys your
+With every push to Git, Hypermode automatically builds and deploys your
 functions. It creates a live, scalable API for you to preview, test, and promote
 to production.
 

modify-project.mdx

@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ settings.
 
 ## Update project name
 
-Your project name is a display name only and changing it doesn't impact your
-running app. To update your project display name, click **Settings** →
-**General**. Enter a new name and click **Save**.
+Your project name is display-only and changing it doesn't impact your running
+app. To update your project display name, click **Settings** → **General**.
+Enter a new name and click **Save**.
 
 ## Update project slug
 

observe-functions.mdx

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: "Understand what's happening within your functions"
 ---
 
 When you invoke a function or model within your app, Modus records the
-execution. The Hypermode Console makes debugging easy with easy to understand
+execution. The Hypermode Console makes debugging simple with easy to understand
 logs and metrics.
 
 ## Function runs

quickstart.mdx

@@ -140,8 +140,8 @@ the basic components of a Modus app and how to deploy it to Hypermode.
     }
     ```
 
-    Save the file and push an update to your git repo. Hypermode automatically redeploys
-    whenever you push an update to the target branch in your git repo. Go back to the Hypermode Console
+    Save the file and push an update to your Git repo. Hypermode automatically redeploys
+    whenever you push an update to the target branch in your Git repo. Go back to the Hypermode Console
     and run the same query as before. You should see the response now uses surfing analogies!
 
       <img

user-management.mdx

@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ edit menu within the target user’s row.
 
 ## Removing a user
 
-To remove a user from your organization, from the Users tab identify the user
-you would like to remove. Click the `...` to reveal the **Remove User** button.
+To remove a user from your organization, identify the user you would like to
+remove in the Users tab. Click the `...` to reveal the **Remove User** button.
 
 Removing a user from your organization doesn't delete their Hypermode user
-account impact their access to other organizations.
+account or impact their access to other organizations.

work-locally.mdx

@@ -3,28 +3,34 @@ title: Work Locally
 description: "Seamless local-to-cloud experience for rapid experimentation"
 ---
 
-Building Modus apps is even easier when you add Hypermode. The Hyp CLI extends
-the [local Modus experience](/modus/modus-cli) with access to Hypermode-hosted
-models defined in your [app's manifest](/modus/app-manifest) for rapid
+By using the Hyp CLI, you can access Hypermode-hosted models defined in your
+[app's manifest](/modus/app-manifest). This allows for seamless and rapid
 experimentation with new AI models.
 
 ## Hyp CLI setup
 
-For access to hosted models, install the Hyp CLI to augment Modus.
+The Hyp CLI helps you manage your Hypermode projects. You can install the Hyp
+CLI to augment Modus and access your Hypermode-hosted models locally.
 
-<CodeGroup>
+<Steps>
+    <Step title="Install Hyp CLI">
+        <CodeGroup>
 
-```bash MacOS + Linux
-curl -sSL http://install.hypermode.com/hyp.sh | bash
-```
+        ```bash MacOS + Linux
+        curl -sSL http://install.hypermode.com/hyp.sh | bash
+        ```
 
-```js Windows
-npm install -g @hypermode/hyp-cli
-```
+        ```js Windows
+        npm install -g @hypermode/hyp-cli
+        ```
 
-</CodeGroup>
+        </CodeGroup>
+    </Step>
+    <Step title="Log in to the Hyp CLI">
+        Ensure you're logged in to the Hyp CLI with the `hyp login` command.
+    </Step>
+    <Step title="Run your app locally">
+        Run `modus dev` to run your Modus app locally.
+    </Step>
 
-## Log into Hyp
-
-Before running `modus dev` to run your Modus app locally, ensure you're logged
-into the Hyp CLI with the `hyp login` command.
+</Steps>