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Change the subordinating conjunction "Whereas" followed by a comma to the less grammatically-incorrect "Although". I've been meaning to do this since 22 Mar 2023. Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <[email protected]>
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doc/architecture.rst

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Ceph Storage Clusters are dynamic--like a living organism. Whereas, many storage
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Ceph Storage Clusters are dynamic--like a living organism. Although many storage
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appliances do not fully utilize the CPU and RAM of a typical commodity server,
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Ceph does. From heartbeats, to peering, to rebalancing the cluster or
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recovering from faults, Ceph offloads work from clients (and from a centralized

doc/rados/api/python.rst

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.. The Ceph Storage Cluster allows you to make a snapshot of a pool's state.
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.. Whereas, basic pool operations only require a connection to the cluster,
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.. Although basic pool operations require only a connection to the cluster,
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.. snapshots require an I/O context.
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doc/rados/configuration/mon-config-ref.rst

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When you add monitor settings to your Ceph configuration file, you need to be
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aware of some of the architectural aspects of Ceph Monitors. **Ceph imposes
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strict consistency requirements** for a Ceph monitor when discovering another
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Ceph Monitor within the cluster. Whereas, Ceph Clients and other Ceph daemons
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Ceph Monitor within the cluster. Although Ceph Clients and other Ceph daemons
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use the Ceph configuration file to discover monitors, monitors discover each
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other using the monitor map (monmap), not the Ceph configuration file.
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doc/start/documenting-ceph.rst

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Indented text may include literal text examples. Whereas, text indentation
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Indented text may include literal text examples. Although text indentation
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should be done with spaces, literal text examples should be indented with
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tabs. This convention enables you to add an additional indented paragraph
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following a literal example by leaving a blank line and beginning the

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