Merge pull request #1061 from olgahryniuk/patch-1

Tech writing review

Author: jpraynaud

docs/root/manual/getting-started/SPO-on-boarding-guide.md

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 import NetworksMatrix from '../../networks-matrix.md';
 import CompiledBinaries from '../../compiled-binaries.md'
 
-# SPO On-boarding Guide
+# SPO onboarding guide
 
 ## The journey with Mithril toward `mainnet`
 
-Welcome to Mithril! Here is a description of the journey you will have to follow as a SPO in order to get ready for running a **Mithril Signer** in the `mainnet`.
-We are assuming that you are already an active SPO on the Cardano `mainnet` and at least on the `preprod` testnet.
+Welcome to Mithril! Here is a description of the journey you will need to follow as an SPO to prepare for running a Mithril Signer on the `mainnet`. We assume that you are already an active SPO on the Cardano `mainnet` and have experience on the `pre-production` testnet.
 
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-This diagram randomly crashes. We replace it with screeenshot until aif xi s available
+This diagram randomly crashes. We replace it with a screenshot until aif xi s available
 TODO: revert this modification when it is possible
 ```mermaid
 timeline
-section Cardano Preview
-SPO Pioneer Program : Optional : SPO test Mithril distributions pre-release with IOG : Run Mithril Signer in `pre-release-preview` network : Naive or Production deployment : ~2-3 days
-section Cardano Preprod
-SPO Beta Mainnet Preparation : Mandatory : SPO validates that Mithril is working in test environment : Run Mithril Signer in `release-preprod` network : Production deployment : ~10-15 days
-section Cardano Mainnet
-SPO Beta Mainnet Deployment : Mandatory : SPO runs Mithril in their mainnet infrastructure : Run Mithril Signer in `release-mainnet` network : Production deployment : ~10-15 days
+section Preview testing environment
+SPO Pioneer Program : Optional : SPOs test Mithril pre-releases with IOG : Run Mithril Signer in `pre-release-preview` network : Naive or Production deployment : ~2-3 days
+section Pre-production testing environment
+SPO beta mainnet preparation : Mandatory : SPOs validate that Mithril is working in the test environment : Run Mithril Signer in `release-preprod` network : Production deployment : ~10-15 days
+section Cardano mainnet
+SPO beta mainnet deployment : Mandatory : SPOs run Mithril in their mainnet infrastructure : Run Mithril Signer in `release-mainnet` network : Production deployment : ~10-15 days
 ```
 -->
 ![SPO On-boarding Timeline](images/spo-onboarding-timeline.png)
 
-## Step 1: Participate to the Pioneer Program
+## Step 1: Participate in the Pioneer Program
 
 :::info
 
 This step is **optional**, but recommended as it helps us deliver quality software. We are actively looking for SPO candidates to test Mithril on the Cardano testnets. Contact us [here](https://contact.mithril.network/) if you are interested!
 
 :::
 
-In order to participate to the Pioneer Program, you will need to:
-- Register to the **Mithril SPO Pioneer Program** with this [form](https://contact.mithril.network/).
-- Run an active SPO on the Cardano `preview` network (registered for a least `1` epoch or `1` day).
-- Setup a **Mithril Signer** node on the `pre-release-preview` Mithril network by following the [**Run a Mithril Signer node (SPO)**](run-signer-node.md) guide.
-- You can run at your convenience the **Naive** (easier to setup) or the **Production** deployment model.
-- Wait for `2` epochs (or `2` days) before your **Mithril Signer** is eligible to contribute.
-- Verify that your **Pool Id** is listed in some of the produced certificates with the [**Mithril Explorer**](https://mithril.network/explorer?aggregator=https%3A%2F%2Faggregator.pre-release-preview.api.mithril.network%2Faggregator).
-- :warning: Follow our [**#moria**](https://discord.gg/5kaErDKDRq) discord channel or our [**GitHub repository**](https://github.com/input-output-hk/mithril/releases?q=pre) for new pre-releases to install.
-- Feel free to ask questions about any technical issue and/or provide feedback on the [**#moria**](https://discord.gg/5kaErDKDRq) discord channel.
+To participate in the Pioneer Program, you will need to:
+- Register for the **Mithril SPO Pioneer Program** using this [form](https://contact.mithril.network/).
+- Run an active SPO on the Cardano `preview` network for at least one epoch or one day. 
+- Set up a **Mithril Signer** node on the `pre-release-preview` Mithril network by following the [**Run a Mithril Signer node (SPO)**](run-signer-node.md) guide.
+- You can choose between the **Naive** (easier to set up) or the **Production** deployment models.
+- Wait for two epochs (or two days) before your **Mithril Signer** is eligible to contribute.
+- Verify that your **Pool Id** is listed in some of the produced certificates using the [**Mithril Explorer**](https://mithril.network/explorer?aggregator=https%3A%2F%2Faggregator.pre-release-preview.api.mithril.network%2Faggregator).
+- :warning: Follow our [**#moria**](https://discord.gg/5kaErDKDRq) Discord channel or our [**GitHub repository**](https://github.com/input-output-hk/mithril/releases?q=pre) for new pre-releases to install.
+- If you have any technical issues or would like to provide feedback, feel free to ask questions on the [**#moria**](https://discord.gg/5kaErDKDRq) Discord channel.
 
-Each **Mithril Network** has its own configuration, which is accessible in the [Configuration Parameters](#configuration-parameters) section of this guide.
+Each **Mithril network** has its own configuration, which can be found in the [Configuration parameters](#configuration-parameters) section of this guide.
 
 ## Step 2: Get Mithril ready for `mainnet`
 
@@ -55,41 +54,41 @@ This step is **mandatory**. You must complete it before moving forward to **Step
 
 :::
 
-In order to get ready for `mainnet`, you need to:
-- Run an active SPO on the Cardano `preprod` network (registered for a least `1` epoch or `5` days).
-- Setup a **Mithril Signer** node on the `release-preprod` Mithril network by following the [**Run a Mithril Signer node (SPO)**](run-signer-node.md) guide.
+To get ready for `mainnet`, you need to:
+- Be an active SPO on the Cardano `preprod` network for at least one epoch or five days.
+- Set up a **Mithril Signer** node on Mithril's `release-preprod` network by following the [**Run a Mithril Signer node (SPO)**](run-signer-node.md) guide.
 - You **must** run the **Production** deployment model.
-- Wait for `2` epochs (or `10` days) before your **Mithril Signer** is eligible to contribute.
-- Verify that your **Pool Id** is listed in some of the produced certificates with the [**Mithril Explorer**](https://mithril.network/explorer?aggregator=https%3A%2F%2Faggregator.release-preprod.api.mithril.network%2Faggregator).
-- :warning: Follow our [**#moria**](https://discord.gg/5kaErDKDRq) discord channel or our [**GitHub repository**](https://github.com/input-output-hk/mithril/releases/latest) for new releases to install.
-- Feel free to ask questions about any technical issue and/or provide feedback on the [**#moria**](https://discord.gg/5kaErDKDRq) discord channel.
+- Wait for two epochs (or ten days) before your **Mithril Signer** is eligible to contribute.
+- Verify that your **Pool Id** is listed in some of the produced certificates using the [**Mithril Explorer**](https://mithril.network/explorer?aggregator=https%3A%2F%2Faggregator.release-preprod.api.mithril.network%2Faggregator).
+- :warning: Follow our [**#moria**](https://discord.gg/5kaErDKDRq) Discord channel or our [**GitHub repository**](https://github.com/input-output-hk/mithril/releases/latest) for new releases to install.
+- If you have any technical issues or would like to provide feedback, feel free to ask questions on the [**#moria**](https://discord.gg/5kaErDKDRq) Discord channel.
 
-Each **Mithril Network** has its own configuration, which is accessible in the [Configuration Parameters](#configuration-parameters) section of this guide.
+Each **Mithril network** has its own configuration, which can be found in the [Configuration parameters](#configuration-parameters) section of this guide.
 
-## Step 3: Run Mithril on the `mainnet`
+## Step 3: Run Mithril on `mainnet`
 
 :::warning
 
 This step is **mandatory**. You must have completed **Step 2** before.
 
-The `release-mainnet` is not available yet, you will be notified when the service is opened.
+The `release-mainnet` is not yet available. You will be notified when the service is open.
 
 :::
 
-In order to run **Mithril** on the `mainnet`, you need to:
-- Run an active SPO on the Cardano `mainnet` network (registered for a least `1` epoch or `5` days).
-- Setup a **Mithril Signer** node on the `release-mainnet` Mithril network by following the [**Run a Mithril Signer node (SPO)**](run-signer-node.md) guide.
+To run **Mithril** on `mainnet`, you need to:
+- Be an active SPO on Cardano `mainnet` for at least one epoch or five days.
+- Set up a **Mithril Signer** node on Mithril's `release-mainnet` network by following the [**Run a Mithril Signer node (SPO)**](run-signer-node.md) guide.
 - You **must** run the **Production** deployment model.
-- Wait for `2` epochs (or `10` days) before your **Mithril Signer** is eligible to contribute.
-- Verify that your **Pool Id** is listed in some of the produced certificates with the [**Mithril Explorer**](https://mithril.network/explorer?aggregator=https%3A%2F%2Faggregator.release-mainnet.api.mithril.network%2Faggregator).
-- :warning: Follow our [**#moria**](https://discord.gg/5kaErDKDRq) discord channel or our [**GitHub repository**](https://github.com/input-output-hk/mithril/releases/latest) for new releases to install.
-- Feel free to ask questions about any technical issue and/or provide feedback on the [**#moria**](https://discord.gg/5kaErDKDRq) discord channel.
+- Wait for two epochs (or ten days) before your **Mithril Signer** is eligible to contribute.
+- Verify that your **Pool Id** is listed in some of the produced certificates using the [**Mithril Explorer**](https://mithril.network/explorer?aggregator=https%3A%2F%2Faggregator.release-mainnet.api.mithril.network%2Faggregator).
+- :warning: Follow our [**#moria**](https://discord.gg/5kaErDKDRq) Discord channel or our [**GitHub repository**](https://github.com/input-output-hk/mithril/releases/latest) for new releases to install.
+- If you have any technical issues or would like to provide feedback, feel free to ask questions on the [**#moria**](https://discord.gg/5kaErDKDRq) Discord channel.
 
-Each **Mithril Network** has its own configuration, which is accessible in the [Configuration Parameters](#configuration-parameters) section of this guide.
+Each **Mithril network** has its own configuration, which can be found in the [Configuration parameters](#configuration-parameters) section of this guide.
 
-## Configuration Parameters
+## Configuration parameters
 
-:::note Mithril Networks
+:::note Mithril networks
 
 <NetworksMatrix />