chore: update readme

Author: Ehesp

README.md

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 React Query Firebase provides a set of easy to use hooks for handling asynchronous tasks with Firebase in your React application.
 ## Why should I use React Query Firebase?
 
-- **Backed by [React Query](https://react-query.tanstack.com)** - Unlike other solutions, hooks are built on top of [React Query](https://react-query.tanstack.com) which takes care of complex challenges
+- **Backed by React Query** - Unlike other solutions, hooks are built on top of [React Query](https://react-query.tanstack.com) which takes care of complex challenges
 such as caching, automatic refetching, realtime data subscriptions, pagination & infinite queries, mutations, SSR Support, data selectors, side effect handlers and more. You also get [DevTool](https://react-query.tanstack.com/devtools)
 support out of the box!
-- **Un-opinionated** - You provide the Query Keys, Configuration & Firebase instances which allows you full control over how the data is integrated and cached. You can also roll it alongside any existing Firebase usage.
+- **Un-opinionated** - You provide the Query Keys, Configuration & Firebase instances, allowing for full control over how your data is integrated and cached. You can also roll it alongside any existing Firebase usage.
 - **Performant & Efficient** - Whether your queries are one-off or realtime, the library is designed to be performant and efficient. Data fetching is handled via [Queries](https://react-query.tanstack.com/guides/queries) and 
-[Query Keys](https://react-query.tanstack.com/guides/query-keys), meaning components can share data and queries throughout your application.
-- **Mutations** - Sign a user in, delete a document, run a transaction, log an event... Don't worry about managing your own local state, React Query Firebase takes care of that for you via [Mutations](https://react-query.tanstack.com/guides/mutations).
+[Query Keys](https://react-query.tanstack.com/guides/query-keys), meaning components can share data throughout your application without needless database reads.
+- **Mutations** - Sign a user in, delete a document, run a transaction, log an event...  React Query Firebase takes care of that for you via [Mutations](https://react-query.tanstack.com/guides/mutations), allowing you to focus
+on your application and not managing complex local loading & error states.
 - **Fully Typed** - The library is built with and has full compatibility with TypeScript.
 
 > **Note**: The library supports the Firebase JS SDK v9 - [learn more about it here](https://firebase.googleblog.com/2021/08/the-new-firebase-js-sdk-now-ga.html)!