Update privacy-policy.mdx

Author: clairekinde11

src/content/docs/trust-center/privacy-and-compliance/privacy-policy.mdx

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 * **Professional data** including where you are a worker of ours or applying for a role with us, your professional history such as your previous positions and professional experience.
 * **Sensitive information** is a sub-set of personal information that is given a higher level of protection. Sensitive information means information relating to your racial or ethnic origin, political opinions, religion, trade union or other professional associations or memberships, philosophical beliefs, sexual orientation or practices, criminal records, health information or biometric information. We do not actively request sensitive information about you. If at any time we need to collect sensitive information about you, unless otherwise permitted by law, we will first obtain your consent and we will only use it as required or authorised by law.
 
-Where you are an External User
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-* **Identity Data** including your first and last name.
-* **Contact Data** including your telephone number and email.
-* **Financial Data** including bank account and payment card details.
-* **Transaction Data** including details about payments to you from us and from you to us and other details of products and services you have purchased from us or we have purchased from you.
-* **Technical and Usage Data** when you access any of our websites or platforms, details about your internet protocol (IP) address, login data, browser session and geo-location data, statistics on page views and sessions, device and network information, acquisition sources, search queries and/or browsing behaviour, access and use of our website (including through the use of Internet cookies), and communications with our website.
-* **Profile Data** including your username and password for the Kinde platform, purchases or orders you have made with us and support requests you have made.
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 ## How we collect personal information
 
 We collect personal information in a variety of ways, including:
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 Our website may contain links to other party’s websites. We do not have any control over those websites and we are not responsible for the protection and privacy of any personal information which you provide whilst visiting those websites. Those websites are not governed by this Privacy Policy.
 
-## Additional rights and information for individual located in the EU or UK
+## Additional rights and information for individuals located in the EU or UK
 
-Under the GDPR individuals located in the EU and the UK have extra rights which apply to their personal information. Personal information under the GDPR is often referred to as personal data and is defined as information relating to an identified or identifiable natural person (individual). This ’Additional rights and information for individual located in the EU or UK’ section sets out the additional rights we give to individuals located in the EU and UK, as well as information on how we process the personal information of individuals located in the EU and UK. Please read the Privacy Policy above and this ‘Additional rights and information for individual located in the EU or UK’ section carefully and contact us at the details at the end of the Privacy Policy if you have any questions.
+Under the GDPR, individuals located in the EU and the UK have extra rights which apply to their personal information. Personal information under the GDPR is often referred to as personal data and is defined as information relating to an identified or identifiable natural person (individual). This ’Additional rights and information for individuals located in the EU or UK’ section sets out the additional rights we give to individuals located in the EU and UK, as well as information on how we process the personal information of individuals located in the EU and UK. Please read the Privacy Policy above and this ‘Additional rights and information for individuals located in the EU or UK’ section carefully and contact us at the details at the end of the Privacy Policy if you have any questions.
 
 ## What personal information is relevant?
 
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 To determine the appropriate retention period for personal information, we consider the amount, nature and sensitivity of the personal information, the potential risk of harm from unauthorised use or disclosure of your personal information, the purposes for which we process your personal information and whether we can achieve those purposes through other means, and the applicable legal, regulatory, tax, accounting or other requirements.
 
-##Extra rights for EU and UK individuals
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 You may request details of the personal information that we hold about you and how we process it (commonly known as a “data subject request”). You may also have a right in accordance with applicable data protection law to have your personal information rectified or deleted, to restrict our processing of that information, to object to decisions being made based on automated processing where the decision will produce a legal effect or a similarly significant effect on you, to stop unauthorised transfers of your personal information to a third party and, in some circumstances, to have personal information relating to you transferred to you or another organisation.
 
 If you are not happy with how we are processing your personal information, you have the right to make a complaint at any time to the relevant Data Protection Authority based on where you live. We would, however, appreciate the chance to deal with your concerns before you approach the Data Protection Authority, so please contact us in the first instance using the details set out below.