@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ Encapsulating Security Payload (ESP) defined in [RFC4303]. These
4646improvements address evolving requirements in modern IPsec
4747deployments. EESP offers increased flexibility for hardware
4848offloads at the packet level. It supports carrying inner packet flow
49- identifiers foe the use with ECMP, RSS hardware, and IPsec peers
49+ identifiers for the use with ECMP, RSS hardware, and IPsec peers
5050prior to decryption. EESP also enables the establishment of Sub Child
5151SAs with independent sequence number spaces. Additionally, it
5252supports the use of 64-bit sequence numbers in each packet or the
@@ -63,9 +63,13 @@ EESP specific transform properties and properties.
6363The extensions defined here enable EESP SAs to coexist with ESP SAs
6464in stateful decryption configurations, sharing a common SPI namespace
6565while introducing new capabilities to enhance IPsec’s performance
66- and versatility in modern use cases. By starting with the SPI in the
67- Base Header, EESP maintains compatibility with existing ESP UDP
68- encapsulation formats, simplifying integration.
66+ and versatility in modern use cases.
67+
68+ # XXX: This changed in the EESP draft!
69+ #
70+ # By starting with the SPI in the
71+ # Base Header, EESP maintains compatibility with existing ESP UDP
72+ # encapsulation formats, simplifying integration.
6973
7074This document does not obsolete or update any existing RFCs. While
7175stateless implementations of EESP are referenced, their negotiation,
@@ -278,7 +282,7 @@ cryptographers one method will be chosen.
278282The requirements:
279283- Independent keys for each Sub SA
280284- Ability to derive Sub SA keys on the fly with least amount of memory usage
281- - Minimal meomory requirements
285+ - Minimal memory requirements
282286- Keyderviation support multiple SAs, such as EESP, AH
283287
284288**** Iterative key derivation
@@ -330,9 +334,9 @@ iterative feedback mode.
330334**** Hierarchical key derivation
331335
332336Hierarchical key derivation use Sub SA ID, which is carried in EESP
333- Seesion ID or in EESP Flow ID(TLV), as an input the key dervivation.
337+ Seesion ID or in EESP Flow ID(TLV), as an input to the key dervivation.
334338
335- Two KDF are propsed below and eventully choose one of them.
339+ Two KDF are propsed below and eventually choose one of them.
336340
337341KEYMAT = prf+(SK_child, Sub SA ID)
338342
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