address feedback from review

Author: kannon92

wg-batch/annual-report-2024.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ We will breakdown our highlights into Sub Projects, KEPs, talks, community adopt
 
 ##### Kueue
 
-Kueue has had 5 releases in 2024.
+Kueue has had 5 minor releases in 2024.
 
 - [Release 0.6](https://github.com/kubernetes-sigs/kueue/releases/tag/v0.6.0)
 
@@ -32,19 +32,25 @@ Kueue has had 5 releases in 2024.
 
 In 2024, the kueue community would like to highlight are Topology aware scheduling, MultiKueue, Kueue Dashboard, KueueCtrl, Deployment/Statefulset integration for serving and Fair sharing.
 
-Topology aware scheduling facilitates scheduling of workloads that take in account data center topology. Workloads benefit from using interconnects that are physically close together.
+[Topology aware scheduling](https://kueue.sigs.k8s.io/docs/concepts/topology_aware_scheduling/) facilitates scheduling of workloads that take in account data center topology.
+Workloads benefit from using interconnects that are physically close together.
 
-MultiKueue provides a way of dispatching batch workloads to worker clusters. Kueue provides multicluster dispatching for popular batch workloads such as Ray, Job, Kubeflow and JobSet. This feature went beta in 0.9.
+[MultiKueue](https://kueue.sigs.k8s.io/docs/concepts/multikueue/) provides a way of dispatching batch workloads to worker clusters.
+Kueue provides multicluster dispatching for popular batch workloads such as Ray, Job, Kubeflow and JobSet.
+This feature went beta in 0.9.
 
-Kueue Dashboards has been a popular ask for Kueue. Users would like to have a visualization representation of queueing and we are happy to announce that a dashboard has been created for Kueue. This went into kueue in late 2024 and a big focus of 2025 will be to harden this for production.
+[Kueue Dashboards](https://github.com/kubernetes-sigs/kueue/tree/release-0.10/cmd/experimental/kueue-viz) has been a popular ask for Kueue.
+Users would like to have a visualization representation of queueing and we are happy to announce that a dashboard has been created for Kueue.
+This went into kueue in late 2024 and a big focus of 2025 will be to harden this for production.
 
-KueueCtrl provides a cli for creating kueue objects. The plugin is hosted in krew and is easily installed as a kueue plugin.
+[KueueCtl](https://kueue.sigs.k8s.io/docs/reference/kubectl-kueue/) provides a cli for creating kueue objects.
+The plugin is hosted in krew and is easily installed as a kueue plugin.
 
-Deployment/StatefulSet integration provides an avenue for the usage of Kueue for serving workloads. Serving leads to a need for sharing/preemption of model servers that may leverage accelerators. Kueue provides an integration with popular methods of deploying services (Deployment/StatefulSet).
+[Deployment](https://kueue.sigs.k8s.io/docs/tasks/run/deployment/) and [StatefulSet](https://kueue.sigs.k8s.io/docs/tasks/run/statefulset/) integration provides an avenue for the usage of Kueue for serving workloads. Serving leads to a need for sharing/preemption of model servers that may leverage accelerators. Kueue provides an integration with popular methods of deploying services (Deployment/StatefulSet).
 
 ##### JobSet
 
-Jobset has had 4 release in 2024.
+Jobset has had 4 minor releases in 2024.
 
 - [Release 0.4](https://github.com/kubernetes-sigs/jobset/releases/tag/v0.4.0)
 
@@ -54,14 +60,14 @@ Jobset has had 4 release in 2024.
 
 - [Release 0.7](https://github.com/kubernetes-sigs/jobset/releases/tag/v0.7.0)
 
-A major achievement of JobSet has been the adoption of JobSet as a component for Kubeflow Training Operator V2.
+A major achievement of JobSet has been the adoption of JobSet as a component for [Kubeflow Training Operator](https://github.com/kubeflow/training-operator) V2.
 There has been a collaborative effort with the Kubeflow community and the batch community to implement the features needed for this integration.
 
 [Metaflow](https://github.com/Netflix/metaflow/pull/1804) has adopted the use of JobSet for distributed ML training.
 
 ##### KJob
 
-[KJob](https://github.com/kubernetes-sigs/kjob?tab=readme-ov-file#kjob) has been started to provide a CLI friendly way for users to submit batch jobs.
+[KJob](https://github.com/kubernetes-sigs/kjob) has been started to provide a CLI friendly way for users to submit batch jobs.
 The HPC/ML community tend to prefer CLI over YAML so the focus was to provide a templated solution for submitting batch jobs.
 Another focus of this project is to provide a smooth transition for Slurm users.
 
@@ -87,32 +93,39 @@ WG-Batch provided a series of kubernetes enhancements that improved the experien
 ### Talks
 
 - WG-Batch Update at Kubecon
-  - Authors: Kevin Hannon and Marcin Wielgus
+  - Speakers: Kevin Hannon and Marcin Wielgus
   - Kubecon NA, Salt Lake City
+  - [Recording](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C2ABOEzZTWg&list=PLj6h78yzYM2Pw4mRw4S-1p_xLARMqPkA7&index=283&pp=iAQB)
 
 - Keynote: MultiCluster Batch Jobs Dispatching with Kueue at CERN
-  - Authors: Ricardo Rocha and Marcin Wielgus
+  - Speakers: Ricardo Rocha and Marcin Wielgus
   - Kubecon NA, Salt Lake City
+  - [Recording](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xMmskWIlktA&list=PLj6h78yzYM2Pw4mRw4S-1p_xLARMqPkA7&index=193&pp=iAQB)
 
 - Multitenancy and Fairness at Scale with Kueue: A Case Study
-  - Authors: Aldo Culquicondor and Rajat Phull
+  - Speakers: Aldo Culquicondor and Rajat Phull
   - Kubecon NA, Salt Lake City
+  - [Recording](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GYiuTQCvTx8&list=PLj6h78yzYM2Mvqk_mNejD7kbe3tldxxsr&index=5&pp=iAQB)
 
 - Advanced Resource Management for Running AI/ML Workloads with Kueue
-  - Authors: Michał Woźniak and Yuki Iwai
+  - Speakers: Michał Woźniak and Yuki Iwai
   - Kubecon EU, Paris
+  - [Recording](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6k_8Go3u8Qk)
 
 - Scale Your Batch / Big Data / AI Workloads Beyond the Kubernetes Scheduler
-  - Authors: Antonin Stefanutti and Anish Asthana
+  - Speaker: Antonin Stefanutti and Anish Asthana
   - KubeCon EU, Paris
+  - [Recording](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ij5EAnuF-jk&list=PLj6h78yzYM2PWGv34W6w5ssq1b1meRmY7&index=15&pp=iAQB)
 
 - WG-Batch Update
-  - Author: Marcin Wielgus
+  - Speaker: Michał Woźniak and Yuki Iwai
   - KubeCon EU, Paris
+  - [Recording](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2D2QSzUnS0M&list=PLj6h78yzYM2N8nw1YcqqKveySH6_0VnI0&index=84&pp=iAQB)
 
 - How the Kubernetes Community is Improving Kubernetes for HPC/AI/ML Workloads
   - Author: Kevin Hannon
   - FOSDEM 2024
+  - [Recording](https://live.fosdem.org/watch/ua2118)
 
 ### Community adoption
 
@@ -130,9 +143,8 @@ Operational tasks in [wg-governance.md]:
 - [x] WG leaders in [sigs.yaml] are accurate and active, and updated if needed
 - [x] Meeting notes and recordings for 2024 are linked from [README.md] and updated/uploaded if needed
 - [x] Updates provided to sponsoring SIGs in 2024
-      - WG-Batch Updates at Kubecon EU 2024
-      - WG-Batch Updates at Kubecon NA 2024
-
+      - [WG-Batch Updates at Kubecon EU 2024](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2D2QSzUnS0M&list=PLj6h78yzYM2N8nw1YcqqKveySH6_0VnI0&index=84&pp=iAQB)
+      - [WG-Batch Updates at Kubecon NA 2024](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C2ABOEzZTWg&list=PLj6h78yzYM2Pw4mRw4S-1p_xLARMqPkA7&index=283&pp=iAQB)
 [wg-governance.md]: https://git.k8s.io/community/committee-steering/governance/wg-governance.md
 [README.md]: https://git.k8s.io/community/wg-batch/README.md
 [sigs.yaml]: https://git.k8s.io/community/sigs.yaml