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draft-ietf-lamps-rfc4210bis.md

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Note that other documents like {{X509.2019}} and {{RFC5280}} use the
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term "trusted CA" or "trust anchor" instead of "root CA". This
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documents continues using "root CA" based on the above definition
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document continues using "root CA" based on the above definition
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because it is also present in the ASN.1 syntax that cannot be changed
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\[See {{sect-3.1.1.2}} for this document's definition of "root CA".\]
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If a newly created root CA is at the top of a PKI hierarchy, it usually produced produce a "self-certificate", which is a
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If a newly created root CA is at the top of a PKI hierarchy, it usually
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produces a "self-certificate", which is a
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certificate structure with the profile defined for the "newWithNew"
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certificate issued following a root CA key update.
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Profile of how a certificate structure may be "self-signed". These
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structures are used for distribution of new root CA public keys in a self-signed certificate. This can
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structures are used for distribution of new root CA public keys. This can
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occur in one of three ways (see {{sect-4.4}} above for a description
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* Addressing DISCUSS from Paul Wouters by extending text of Sections 3.1.1.2, 4.4, 5.2.5, 6, and D.3.
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* Addressing DISCUSS from Paul Wouters by extending text of Sections 3.1.1.2, 4.4, 5.2.5, 6, and D.3.
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* Updated IPSEC -> IPsec
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