Fix: review edits to documentation from @arianesasso

Update documentation/index.md

Co-authored-by: Ariane Sasso <[email protected]>

Update documentation/package-documentation-sphinx.md

Co-authored-by: Ariane Sasso <[email protected]>

Author: lwasser

documentation/index.md

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ alt: Image showing the files in the Moving Pandas GitHub repository.
 An example GitHub repository with all of the major files in it including CONTRIBUTING.md, README.md, CODE_OF_CONDUCT.md and a LICENSE.txt file. *(screen shot taken Nov 23 2022)*
 ```
 
-The above files are ones that are evaluated in many online package health
+The above files are evaluated on many online platforms that track package health.
 platforms. Below you can see the community standards page that everyone 
 has in their GitHub repository. 
 

documentation/package-documentation-sphinx.md

@@ -87,8 +87,8 @@ ways to do quickly create a documentation website:
 If you don't want to maintain a documentation website for your Python package, 
 we suggest using Read the Docs. Read the Docs allows you to:
 
-* quickly launch a website using the documentation found in your GitHub repository.  
-* track versions of your documentation as you release updates
+* Quickly launch a website using the documentation found in your GitHub repository.  
+* Track versions of your documentation as you release updates.