review fixes

Author: danciaclara

self-hosting/telemetry.mdx

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ Plane collects machine configurations, environment details, OS flavors, network
 
 ## How we use the data
 
-- **Improving user experience**  
+- **Improving your experience**  
 Analyzing real-world usage guides us in making Plane more intuitive and user-friendly.
 
 - **Detecting and fixing bugs**  
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ Identifying bugs and errors as they occur enables us to quickly investigate and
 Monitoring for abnormal patterns helps us identify and mitigate potential security threats or vulnerabilities, ensuring data protection and platform integrity.
 
 - **Driving product decisions**  
-Understanding how users interact with Plane helps us prioritize future developments and focus on high-impact features and improvements that drive better user outcomes. 
+Understanding how you interact with Plane helps us prioritize future developments and focus on high-impact features and improvements that drive better outcomes. 
 
 ## Disable telemetry
 As much as we'd love to understand your usage better, we agree that you should be in control of your data. If for any reason you don't want to send us that data, you can turn telemetry collection off in three clicks.