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@@ -74,12 +74,12 @@ We recommend promptly reviewing and merging translation pull requests so that yo
 
 ## Writing content to be translated
 
-To make your documentation more translatable and easier to read in English, avoid these common patterns.
+To make your documentation more translatable and easier to read in English, **avoid** these common patterns:
 
 * **Wordiness**: Redundant sentences are more difficult to comprehend and translate.
   * **Avoid**: "In order to be able to successfully complete the installation process..."
   * **Better**: "To install the software..."
-* **Passive voice**: Active voice makes your instructions more clear and translatable.
+* **Passive voice**: Passive voice makes it unclear who performs an action.
   * **Avoid**: "The configuration file should be updated by the administrator."
   * **Better**: "The administrator should update the configuration file."
 * **Negative sentences**: Tell people what to do rather than what not to do.