DOCSP-24954 copy edits

Author: ltran-mdb2

source/connect/advanced-connection-options/advanced-connection.txt

@@ -117,11 +117,10 @@ Procedure
 Example
 -------
 
-The following screenshot shows the :guilabel:`Advanced`
-tab configured with the read preference of :guilabel:`Secondary
-Preferred`. The :guilabel:`Secondary
-Preferred` read pereference helps avoid queries overloading the primary
-node. 
+The following screenshot shows the :guilabel:`Advanced` tab configured
+with the read preference of :guilabel:`Secondary Preferred`. The
+:guilabel:`Secondary Preferred` read preference prevents queries from
+overloading the primary node. 
 
 .. figure:: /images/authentication/secondary-preferred.png
    :figwidth: 662px

source/connect/advanced-connection-options/authentication-connection.txt

@@ -277,14 +277,13 @@ Procedure
 Example
 -------
 
-The following screenshot shows the :guilabel:`Authentication`
-tab configured for username and password authentication with
-SCRAM-SHA-256. 
+The following screenshot shows the :guilabel:`Authentication` tab
+configured for username and password authentication with
+:manual:`SCRAM-SHA-256 </core/security-scram/>`.
 
 .. figure:: /images/authentication/authentication-configuration.png
    :figwidth: 662px
-   :alt: Screenshot of Compass configured to authenticate with username
-   and password
+   :alt: Screenshot of Compass configured to authenticate with username and password
 
 Alternatively, the following screenshot shows the
 :guilabel:`Authentication` tab configured for :manual:`LDAP

source/connect/advanced-connection-options/general-connection.txt

@@ -110,8 +110,10 @@ Procedure
 Example
 -------
 
-The following screenshot shows the :guilabel:`General` tab
-configured for an Atlas cluster. 
+The following screenshot shows the :guilabel:`General` tab configured
+for an Atlas cluster with :manual:`SCRAM-SHA-256
+</core/security-scram/>`. Since the connection uses the ``mongodb+srv``
+connection string scheme, the connection automatically enables TLS/SSL. 
 
 .. figure:: /images/authentication/new-atlas-connection.png
    :alt: Screenshot of Compass configured to connect to an example Atlas cluster

source/connect/advanced-connection-options/tls-ssl-connection.txt

@@ -119,8 +119,8 @@ Procedure
 Example
 -------
 
-The following screenshot shows the :guilabel:`TLS /
-SSL` tab configured for a cluster with TLS/SSL enabled.  
+The following screenshot shows the :guilabel:`TLS / SSL` tab configured
+for a cluster with TLS/SSL enabled. 
 
 .. figure:: /images/authentication/tls-ssl-configuration.png
    :figwidth: 662px