DOCSP-46836 copy edit

Author: ltran-mdb2

source/connect/advanced-connection-options/in-use-encryption.txt

@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@ In-Use Encryption Connection Tab
    :depth: 1
    :class: singlecol
 
-You need a replica set or sharded cluster to use this connection option.
-Your replica set can be a single node or larger. 
+To use this connection option, you need a replica set or sharded
+cluster. Your replica set can be a single node or larger. 
 
 The :guilabel:`In-Use Encryption` connection tab allows you to connect your
 deployments with :v6.0:`Queryable Encryption </core/queryable-encryption/>`.