first pass edits

Author: mayaraman19

source/fundamentals/crud/write-operations/bulk.txt

@@ -307,21 +307,25 @@ Improved Bulk Write Command
 ---------------------------
 
 Starting with {+mdb-server+} version 8.0 and {+driver-short+} version 5.3, there
-is an improved bulk write method, ``MongoClient.bulkWrite()``, that can be used
-to write to different databases and collections in the same cluster.
+is an improved bulk write method, ``MongoClient.bulkWrite()``, that writes to 
+different databases and collections in the same cluster.
 
 In the previous examples on this page, the ``bulkWrite()`` method takes a list
-of ``WriteModel`` documents. The specified subclass of ``WriteModel`` represents
-the corresponding write operation. For example, ``InsertOneModel`` represents 
-inserting one document. Similarly, the new ``bulkWrite()`` method takes a 
+of ``WriteModel`` documents in which the specified subclass of ``WriteModel`` 
+represents the corresponding write operation. For example, ``InsertOneModel`` 
+represents inserting one document. 
+
+Similarly, the new ``bulkWrite()`` method takes a 
 list of ``ClientNamespacedWriteModel`` objects to represent the write operation. 
 However, you do not need to specify the subclass that represents the corresponding
 write operation. Instead, the ``ClientNamespacedWriteModel`` object contains different 
 methods to represent different write operations, such as ``insertOne()`` or 
-``updateOne()``. These methods take a ``MongoNamespace object that defines which
-database and collection to write to and a ``Document`` object that defines the
+``updateOne()``. 
+
+These methods take a ``MongoNamespace`` object that defines which
+database and collection to write to, and a ``Document`` object that defines the
 document information. Some methods, such as ``updateOne()`` and ``replaceOne()``,
-also take a ``filter`` object.
+also take a ``Filters`` object that defines the filter for the operation.
 
 The following sections describe how to use the new ``bulkWrite()`` method.
 
@@ -400,11 +404,11 @@ The following code shows how to use the ``ordered()`` method on the
 ``ClientBulkWriteOptions`` object.
 
 .. code-block:: java
+
    MongoNamespace namespace = new MongoNamespace("db", "people");
 
    ClientBulkWriteOptions options = new ClientBulkWriteOptions().ordered(false);
 
-
    ClientBulkWriteResult result = client.bulkWrite(List<>(
       ClientNamespacedWriteModel.insertOne(namespace, new Document("name", "Donkey Kong")),
       ClientNamespacedWriteModel.insertOne(namespace, new Document("name", "Mario"))