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Author: norareidy

source/get-started.txt

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Get Started with the {+driver-short+}
 
    Download & Install </get-started/download-and-install/>
    Create a Deployment </get-started/create-deployment/>
-   Create a Connection String </get-started/create-a-connection-string/>
+   Create a Connection String </get-started/connection-string/>
    Connect to MongoDB </get-started/connect-to-mongodb/>
    Next Steps </get-started/next-steps/>
 

source/get-started/connect-to-mongodb.txt

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ the Atlas sample datasets.
 
    .. step:: Assign the connection string
 
-      Replace the ``<connection string>`` placeholder with the connection string
+      Replace the ``<connection string uri>`` placeholder with the connection string
       that you copied from the :ref:`java-get-started-connection-string` step of this
       guide.
 
@@ -43,9 +43,6 @@ the Atlas sample datasets.
 
       .. include:: /includes/get-started/query-output.rst
 
-      If you encounter an error or see no output, ensure that you specified the
-      correct connection string and that you loaded the sample data.
-
       .. include:: /includes/get-started/jdk-tls-issue.rst
 
 After you complete these steps, you have a Java application that

source/includes/get-started/jdk-tls-issue.rst

@@ -1,20 +1,17 @@
-.. important:: Known connection issue when using TLS v1.3
+.. important:: TLS v1.3 Connection Error
 
-   If you encounter an error connecting to your MongoDB instance or cluster
-   that resembles the following while running your application, you might need
-   to update your JDK to the latest patch release:
+   If your application generates an error that resembles the following
+   code, you might need to update your JDK to the latest patch release:
 
    .. code-block:: none
       :copyable: false
 
       javax.net.ssl.SSLHandshakeException: extension (5) should not be presented in certificate_request
 
    This exception is a known issue when using the TLS 1.3 protocol with
-   specific versions of JDK, but was fixed for the following releases:
+   some JDK versions. To resolve the error, update your JDK to one of
+   the following versions, or a newer version:
 
    - JDK 11.0.7
    - JDK 13.0.3
-   - JDK 14.0.2
-
-   To resolve this error, update your JDK to one of the preceding patch
-   versions or a newer one.
+   - JDK 14.0.2

source/includes/get-started/query-output.rst

@@ -1,6 +1,3 @@
-When you run the ``QuickStart`` class, it should output the details of the
-movie from the sample dataset, which will resemble the following:
-
 .. code-block:: json
    :copyable: false
 
@@ -13,6 +10,5 @@ movie from the sample dataset, which will resemble the following:
      ...
    }
 
-If you receive no output or an error, check whether you included the proper
-connection string in your Java class, and whether you loaded the sample dataset
-into your MongoDB Atlas cluster.
+If you encounter an error or see no output, ensure that you specified the
+correct connection string and that you loaded the sample data.