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Author: mcmorisi

source/data-formats/time-series.txt

@@ -63,8 +63,8 @@ To create a time series collection, pass the following parameters to the
 - The name of the new collection to create
 
 - A `CreateCollectionOptions <{+core-api+}/com/mongodb/client/model/CreateCollectionOptions.html>`__
-  object containing the `TimeSeriesOptions <{+core-api+}/com/mongodb/client/model/TimeSeriesOptions.html>`__ object
-  for creating your collection
+  object with the `TimeSeriesOptions <{+core-api+}/com/mongodb/client/model/TimeSeriesOptions.html>`__ set
+  using the ``timeSeriesOptions()`` method
 
 .. _kotlin-sync-time-series-create-example:
 
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ Additional Information
 ----------------------
 
 To learn more about the concepts mentioned in this guide, see the
-following Server manual entries:
+following {+mdb-server+} entries:
 
 - :manual:`Time Series </core/timeseries-collections/>`
 - :manual:`Create and Query a Time Series Collection </core/timeseries/timeseries-procedures/>`

source/includes/data-formats/time-series.kt

@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ fun main() {
     // start-create-time-series
     val database = mongoClient.getDatabase("fall_weather")
 
-    val timeSeriesOptions = TimeSeriesOptions("timestamp")
-    val collectionOptions = CreateCollectionOptions().timeSeriesOptions(timeSeriesOptions)
+    val tsOptions = TimeSeriesOptions("timestamp")
+    val collectionOptions = CreateCollectionOptions().timeSeriesOptions(tsOptions)
 
     database.createCollection("october2024", collectionOptions)
     // end-create-time-series