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Author: mcmorisi

source/data-formats.txt

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Specialized Data Formats
 Overview
 --------
 
-You can use several types of specialized data formats in your {+driver-short+}
+You can use several types of specialized document data formats in your {+driver-short+}
 application. To learn how to work with these data formats, see the following
 sections:
 

source/data-formats/bson.txt

@@ -14,27 +14,27 @@ Overview
 --------
 
 In this guide, you can learn about the BSON data format, how MongoDB
-uses it, and how to install the BSON library independently of the
-{+driver-short+}.
+uses BSON to organize and store data, and how to install the BSON library independently of
+the {+driver-short+}.
 
 BSON Data Format
 ----------------
 
 **BSON**, or Binary JSON, is the data format that MongoDB uses to organize
 and store data. This data format includes all JSON data structure types and
-adds support for types including dates, differently-sized integers, ObjectIds, and
-binary data. For a complete list of supported types, see the
-:manual:`BSON Types </reference/bson-types>` server manual page.
+adds support for types including dates, differently-sized integers (32-bit and 64-bit),
+ObjectIds, and binary data. For a complete list of supported types, see the
+:manual:`BSON Types </reference/bson-types>` in the {+mdb-server+} documentation.
 
-The binary format is not human-readable, but you can use the
+BSON is not human-readable, but you can use the
 :ref:`BSON library <install-bson-library>` to convert it to the human-readable JSON
 representation. You can read more about the relationship between these
 formats in the :website:`JSON and BSON </json-and-bson>` guide on the MongoDB website.
 
 MongoDB and BSON
 ----------------
 
-You can use BSON data with your {+driver-short+} application by using one of the
+You can work with BSON data in your {+driver-short+} application by using one of the
 following object types that implements the `BSON interface <{+java-api+}/apidocs/bson/org/bson/conversions/Bson.html>`__:
 
 - `Document <{+java-api+}/apidocs/bson/org/bson/Document.html>`__ (BSON library package)
@@ -63,8 +63,7 @@ your project.
 
 We recommend that you use the `Maven <https://maven.apache.org/>`__ or
 `Gradle <https://gradle.org/>`__ build automation tool to manage your {+language+}
-project's dependencies. Select from the following tabs to see the dependency declaration
-for that tool:
+project's dependencies.
 
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