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Author: norareidy

source/security/authentication/aws-iam.txt

@@ -130,10 +130,10 @@ AWS documentation for the version you need:
 
 .. note::
 
-   For the AWS SDK for Java v2, the Java driver currently tests by using the
+   For the AWS SDK for Java v2, the Java driver tests by using the
    ``software.amazon.awssdk:auth:2.30.31`` dependency.
 
-   For the AWS SDK for Java v1, the Java driver currently tests by using the
+   For the AWS SDK for Java v1, the Java driver tests by using the
    ``com.amazonaws:aws-java-sdk-core:1.12.782`` dependency.
 
 .. _kotlin-mongodb-aws-sdk-credentials:

source/security/authentication/scram.txt

@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ mechanism and use the following placeholder values:
 
 - ``db_username``: Your MongoDB database username.
 - ``db_password``: Your MongoDB database user's password.
-- ``hostname``: The network address of your MongoDB deployment, accessible by your client.
+- ``hostname``: The network address of your MongoDB deployment, open to your client.
 - ``port``: The port number of your MongoDB deployment.
 - ``authenticationDb``: The MongoDB database that contains your user's
   authentication data. If you omit this parameter, the driver uses the
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ mechanism and use the following placeholder values:
 
 - ``db_username``: Your MongoDB database username.
 - ``db_password``: Your MongoDB database user's password.
-- ``hostname``: The network address of your MongoDB deployment, accessible by your client.
+- ``hostname``: The network address of your MongoDB deployment, open to your client.
 - ``port``: The port number of your MongoDB deployment.
 - ``authenticationDb``: The MongoDB database that contains your user's
   authentication data. If you omit this parameter, the driver uses the

source/security/authentication/x509.txt

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Specify X.509 Authentication
 The examples in this section show how to specify the ``X.509`` authentication mechanism 
 and use the following placeholder values:
 
-* ``hostname``: The network address of your MongoDB deployment, accessible by your client.
+* ``hostname``: The network address of your MongoDB deployment, open to your client.
 * ``port``: The port number of your MongoDB server.
 * ``authenticationDb``: The MongoDB database that contains your user's
   authentication data. If you omit this parameter, the driver uses the