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Author: lindseymoore

source/connect/mongoclient.txt

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ To connect to a MongoDB deployment, you need two things:
 - A **connection URI**, also known as a *connection string*, which tells the {+driver-short+}
   which MongoDB deployment to connect to.
 - A **MongoClient** object, which creates the connection to and perform 
-  opertions on the MongoDB deployment.
+  operations on the MongoDB deployment.
 
 You can also use either of these components to customize the way the {+driver-short+} behaves
 while connected to MongoDB.
@@ -40,8 +40,6 @@ Connection URI
 
 A standard connection string includes the following components:
 
-.. Any ref for authentication? Are we planning on making a page for authentication?
-
 .. list-table::
    :widths: 20 80
    :header-rows: 1
@@ -58,8 +56,9 @@ A standard connection string includes the following components:
 
      - Optional. Authentication credentials. If you include these, the client
        authenticates the user against the database specified in ``authSource``.
-       For more information about the ``authSource`` connection option, see
-       :ref:`pymongo-auth`. 
+       
+.. TODO, add this as last sentence for ``username:password``: For more information about the ``authSource`` connection option, see
+:ref:`kotlin-sync-auth`. 
 
    * - ``host[:port]``
 
@@ -80,23 +79,21 @@ A standard connection string includes the following components:
        :ref:`kotlin-sync-connection-options` for a full description of
        these options.
 
-.. Is there relevant connection string content for kotlin sync to ref to? Only see for java sync.
-
 For more information about creating a connection string, see
 :manual:`Connection Strings </reference/connection-string?tck=docs_driver_kotlin>` in the
 MongoDB Server documentation.
 
 Atlas Connection Example
 ------------------------
 
-To connect to a MongoDB deployment on Atlas, create a client. You can create a 
-client that uses your connection string and other client options by passing a 
+To connect to a MongoDB deployment on Atlas, you must first create a client. 
+You can create a client with your desired configurations by passing a 
 ``MongoClientSettings`` object to the ``MongoClient.create()`` method.
 
 To instantiate a ``MongoClientSettings`` object, use the builder method to 
-specify your connection string and any other client options, and then call 
-the ``build()`` method. Chain the ``applyConnectionString()``` method to the 
-builder to specify your connection URI.
+specify your connection string, using the ``applyConnectionString()`` method, 
+and any other client options. Once you have your desired configuration, 
+call the ``build()`` method.
 
 You can set the Stable API version client option to avoid breaking changes when 
 you upgrade to a new server version. To learn more about the Stable API feature, 
@@ -112,99 +109,3 @@ and verify that the connection is successful:
    :language: kotlin
    :copyable:
    :dedent:
-
-Connect to a MongoDB Server or Replica Set
-------------------------------------------
-
-If you are connecting to a single MongoDB server instance or a MongoDB 
-replica set, see the following sections to find out how to connect.
-
-.. _connect-local-kotlin-sync-driver:
-
-Connect to a MongoDB Server on Your Local Machine
-~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
-
-If you need to run a MongoDB server on your local machine for development 
-purposes instead of using an Atlas cluster, you need to complete the following:
-
-1. Download the `Community <https://www.mongodb.com/try/download/community>`__
-   or `Enterprise <https://www.mongodb.com/try/download/enterprise>`__ version
-   of MongoDB Server.
-
-#. :ref:`Install and configure <tutorials-installation>`
-   MongoDB Server.
-
-#. Start the server.
-
-.. important::
-
-   Always secure your MongoDB server from malicious attacks. See our
-   :manual:`Security Checklist </administration/security-checklist/>` for a
-   list of security recommendations.
-
-After you successfully start your MongoDB server, specify your connection
-string in your driver connection code.
-
-If your MongoDB Server is running locally, you can use the connection string
-``"mongodb://localhost:<port>"`` where ``<port>`` is the port number you
-configured your server to listen for incoming connections. If the port number 
-is not specified, the default port ``27017`` is used.
-
-If you need to specify a different hostname or IP address, see our Server
-Manual entry on :manual:`Connection Strings </reference/connection-string/>`.
-
-.. _connect-replica-set:
-
-Connect to a MongoDB Replica Set
-~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
-
-A MongoDB replica set deployment is a group of connected instances that
-store the same set of data. This configuration of instances provides data
-redundancy and high data availability.
-
-To connect to a replica set deployment, specify the hostnames (or IP
-addresses) and port numbers of the members of the replica set. 
-
-If you are not able to provide a full list of hosts in the replica set,
-you can specify a single or subset of the hosts in the replica and
-instruct the driver to perform automatic discovery in one of the following
-ways:
-
-- Specify the name of the replica set as the value of the ``replicaSet``
-  parameter
-- Specify ``false`` as the value of the ``directConnection`` parameter
-- Specify more than one host in the replica set
-
-.. tip::
-
-   Although you can specify a subset of the hosts in a replica set,
-   include all the hosts in the replica set to ensure the driver is able to 
-   establish the connection if one of the hosts are unreachable.
-   
-.. _mongo-client-settings-multiple-hosts:
-
-The following examples show how to specify multiple hosts to a ``MongoClient``
-instance using either the ``ConnectionString`` or ``MongoClientSettings`` 
-class. Select the tab that corresponds to your preferred class.
-
-.. tabs::
-
-   .. tab:: ConnectionString
-      :tabid: connectionstring
-
-      .. literalinclude:: /includes/connect/mongoclient.kt
-        :start-after: start-replica-set-connection-string
-        :end-before: end-replica-set-connection-string
-        :language: kotlin
-        :copyable:
-        :dedent:
-
-   .. tab:: MongoClientSettings
-      :tabid: mongoclientsettings
-
-      .. literalinclude:: /includes/connect/mongoclient.kt
-        :start-after: start-replica-set-client-settings
-        :end-before: end-replica-set-client-settings
-        :language: kotlin
-        :copyable:
-        :dedent: