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Author: rachel-mack

source/fundamentals/data-formats/serialization.txt

@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ Implement Snake Case Naming Strategy
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 When using ``bson-kotlinx`` package v5.4 or later, you can direct the driver to
-serialize data class fields names written in camel case to snake case in MongoDB.
+serialize data class field names written in camel case to snake case in MongoDB.
 The following example shows how to create and register a custom codec
 to convert data class field names into snake case by setting the
 ``bsonNamingStrategy`` parameter in a codec:

source/whats-new.txt

@@ -31,9 +31,9 @@ What's New in 5.4
 The 5.4 driver release includes the following changes, fixes,
 and features:
 
-- Adds ``BsonConfiguration`` support for bson-kotlinx snake case conversion
+- Adds ``BsonConfiguration`` support for ``bson-kotlinx`` snake case conversion
   during serialization. To learn more, see the
-  :ref:`kotlin-serialization-snake-case-eg` on the Serialization page.
+  :ref:`kotlin-serialization-snake-case-eg` section on the Serialization page.
 
 .. sharedinclude:: dbx/jvm/v5.4-wn-items.rst