NR PR fixes 1

Author: rustagir

source/quick-start-sinatra/next-steps.txt

@@ -23,9 +23,9 @@ the sample data, and render retrieved results.
 
 .. TODO Learn more about {+odm+} features from the following resources:
 
-.. - :ref:`mongoid-fundamentals-connection`: learn how to configure your MongoDB
+.. - :ref:`mongoid-fundamentals-connection`: Learn how to configure your MongoDB
 ..   connection.
 .. 
-.. - :ref:`mongoid-usage-examples`: see code examples of frequently used MongoDB
+.. - :ref:`mongoid-usage-examples`: See code examples of frequently used MongoDB
 ..   operations.
 

source/quick-start-sinatra/view-data.txt

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ View MongoDB Data
 
       In the ``app.rb`` file, create a model called ``Restaurant``
       to represent data from the sample ``restaurants`` collection in
-      your MongoDB database:
+      the ``sample_restaurants`` database:
 
       .. code-block:: ruby
 
@@ -46,8 +46,8 @@ View MongoDB Data
 
    .. step:: Generate a view
 
-      To display your data in a specified way by using HTML, you can
-      create a **view**.
+      Create a **view** to display your data in a specified way by using
+      HTML and {+language+}.
 
       At the root level of your project, create a directory
       called ``views``. Then, create a file called
@@ -106,8 +106,8 @@ View MongoDB Data
       use the ``to_json()`` method to display your results in JSON
       format.
 
-      Replace the ``list_restaurants`` route with the following code to
-      retrieve results and return them as JSON documents:
+      Replace the ``list_restaurants`` route in the ``app.rb`` file with
+      the following code to return the results as JSON documents:
 
       .. code-block:: ruby
 

source/quick-start-sinatra/write-data.txt

@@ -28,11 +28,14 @@ Write Data to MongoDB
    .. step:: Post a request to create a restaurant entry
 
       Send a ``Restaurant`` instance to the ``add_restaurant`` endpoint
-      by running the following command in your shell:
+      by running the following command from the application root
+      directory:
 
       .. code-block:: bash
 
-         curl -d 'restaurant[name]=Good+Earth+Cafe&restaurant[cuisine]=Cafe&restaurant[borough]=Queens' http://localhost:4567/add_restaurant
+         curl -d \
+         'restaurant[name]=Good+Earth+Cafe&restaurant[cuisine]=Cafe&restaurant[borough]=Queens' \
+         http://localhost:4567/add_restaurant
 
    .. step:: View the data