feedback

Author: jordan-smith721

source/whats-new.txt

@@ -52,23 +52,23 @@ The {+driver-short+} v4.11 release includes the following new features:
   For more information about free threading, see the 
   `Python documentation <https://docs.python.org/3/howto/free-threading-python.html>`__.
 - In-use encryption requires ``pymongocrypt`` v1.12 or later.
-- ``MongoClient.address`` and ``AsyncMongoClient.address`` now correctly block
+- The ``MongoClient.address()`` and ``AsyncMongoClient.address()`` methods correctly block
   when called on unconnected clients.
 - Adds ``__repr__`` support for the ``IndexModel`` and ``SearchIndexModel`` classes.
 - Adds a ``sort`` parameter to the following methods:
 
-  - ``Collection.update_one``
-  - ``Collection.replace_one``
-  - ``operations.UpdateOne``
-  - ``operations.UpdateMany``
-
-- ``MongoClient.bulkWrite`` and ``AsyncMongoClient.bulk_write`` now throw an
-  error when the ``ordered`` or ``verboseResults`` options are set to ``True``
-  and are used with unacknowledged writes.
+  - ``Collection.update_one()``
+  - ``Collection.replace_one()``
+  - ``operations.UpdateOne()``
+  - ``operations.UpdateMany()``
+
+- The ``MongoClient.bulkWrite()`` and ``AsyncMongoClient.bulk_write()`` methods throw an
+  error error if you use them with unacknowledged writes when the 
+  ``ordered`` or ``verboseResults`` options are set to ``True``.
 - Fixes a bug that caused ``DatetimeMS`` to be incorrectly encoded as
   ``'{"$date": "X"}'`` instead of ``'{"$date": X}'`` when using the the legacy
   MongoDB Extended JSON datetime representation.
-- Fixes a bug that caused ``bson.json_util.loads`` to raise an ``IndexError``
+- Fixes a bug that caused the ``bson.json_util.loads()`` method to raise an ``IndexError``
   instead of a ``ValueError`` when parsing an invalid ``$date`` value.
 
 .. _version-4.10: