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Author: norareidy

snooty.toml

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ sharedinclude_root = "https://raw.githubusercontent.com/10gen/docs-shared/main/"
 driver-short = "PyMongo"
 driver-long = "PyMongo, the MongoDB synchronous Python driver,"
 driver-async = "PyMongo Async"
-django-odm = "MongoDB Backend for Django"
+django-odm = "Django MongoDB Backend"
 language = "Python"
 mdb-server = "MongoDB Server"
 mongo-community = "MongoDB Community Edition"

source/configure-connection.txt

@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ Configure Your Database Connection
 Overview
 --------
 
-In this guide, you can learn how to connect your Django project to MongoDB
-and configure the connection.
+In this guide, you can learn how to configure your Django project's
+connection to MongoDB.
 
 Connection Configuration 
 ------------------------
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ your connection to MongoDB in the following ways:
 
 .. tip::
 
-   To learn how to install the Django ODM and create a
+   To learn how to install {+django-odm+} and create a
    Django project, visit the :ref:`django-get-started` tutorial.
 
 .. _django-connection-configure-manual: