edits

Author: norareidy

source/configure-connection.txt

@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ Connection Configuration
 After installing {+django-odm+} and creating a project, you can configure
 your connection to MongoDB in the following ways:
 
-- :ref:`django-connection-configure-manual` by updating the
-  ``DATABASES`` setting
+- :ref:`django-connection-configure-manual` by updating your
+  project's ``DATABASES`` setting
 - :ref:`django-connection-configure-automatic` by using
   the ``parse_uri()`` method
 
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ to a MongoDB deployment with the following configuration:
 .. tip::
 
     To see a full list of connection options that you
-    can pass to the ``OPTIONS`` field, see the optional
+    can set in the ``OPTIONS`` field, see the optional
     parameters for `MongoClient <https://pymongo.readthedocs.io/en/4.10.1/api/pymongo/mongo_client.html#pymongo.mongo_client.MongoClient>`__
     in the PyMongo API documentation.
 
@@ -142,8 +142,8 @@ Example
 
 The following example uses the ``parse_uri()`` method to connect
 to a MongoDB deployment with the same configuration as 
-the :ref:`manual configuration <django-manual-config-example>`
-example in this guide:
+the previous :ref:`manual configuration <django-manual-config-example>`
+example:
 
 .. code-block:: python