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Author: mcmorisi

source/databases-collections.txt

@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Access a Database
 
 Access a database by using dictionary-style access on your ``MongoClient`` instance.
 
-The following example accesses a database named "test_database":
+The following example accesses a database named ``test_database``:
 
 .. code-block:: python
 
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ Access a Collection
 
 Access a collection by using dictionary-style access on an instance of your database.
 
-The following example accesses a collection named "test_collection":
+The following example accesses a collection named ``test_collection``:
 
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    :emphasize-lines: 2
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Create a Collection
 Use the ``create_collection()`` method to explicitly create a collection in a
 MongoDB database.
 
-The following example creates a collection called ``"example_collection"``:
+The following example creates a collection called ``example_collection``:
 
 .. code-block:: python
    :emphasize-lines: 2
@@ -87,31 +87,31 @@ Time Series Collection
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 Time series collections efficiently store sequences of measurements over a period of time.
-The following example creates a time series collection called ``"example_ts_collection"``
-with a time field called ``"timestamp"``:
+The following example creates a time series collection called ``example_ts_collection``
+in which the documents' time field is called ``timestamp``:
 
 .. code-block:: python
 
    database = client["test_database"]
    database.create_collection("example_ts_collection", timeseries={"timeField": "timestamp"})
 
 For more information about using time series data with {+driver-short+}, see the
-:ref:`<pymongo-time-series>` guide.
+:ref:`pymongo-time-series` guide.
 
 Capped Collection
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-Capped collections have a maximum size that prevent them from growing beyond a specified
-limit. The following example creates a capped collection called ``"example_capped_collection"``
-with a maximum size of 1000 bytes:
+You can create a capped collection that cannot grow beyond a specified memory size or
+document count. The following example creates a capped collection called
+``example_capped_collection`` that has a maximum size of 1000 bytes:
 
 .. code-block:: python
 
    database = client["test_database"]
    database.create_collection("example_capped_collection", capped=True, size=1000)
 
-To learn more about capped collections, see the :manual:`Capped Collections </core/capped-collections/>`
-guide in the {+mdb-server+} manual.
+To learn more about capped collections, see :manual:`Capped Collections </core/capped-collections/>`
+in the {+mdb-server+} manual.
 
 Get a List of Collections
 -------------------------