edits

Author: norareidy

source/django-get-started/django-create-admin.txt

@@ -63,10 +63,9 @@ in the Django documentation.
       Enter the username and password created in the previous step to log in to
       the site. 
 
-   .. step:: Access your sample_mflix app from the admin site
+   .. step:: Access your "sample_mflix" app from the admin site
 
-      After logging in to the admin site, you can see the following index
-      page:
+      After logging in to the admin site, you can see the following information:
 
       .. figure:: /includes/figures/django_admin_index.png
          :alt: The initial content displayed on the Django admin site.

source/django-get-started/django-query-data.txt

@@ -14,11 +14,15 @@ Query MongoDB Data
 .. procedure::
    :style: connected
 
-   .. step:: Query the users collection for a specified email
+   .. step:: Query the "users" collection for a specified email
 
-      Start a Python shell and include the required imports
+      Start a Python shell and import the required models
       by running the following code:
 
+      .. code-block:: bash
+
+         python3 manage.py shell
+         from sample_mflix.models import Movie, Viewer
 
       Then, run the following code to query the 
       ``sample_mflix.users`` collection for a movie viewer whose email is 
@@ -35,7 +39,7 @@ Query MongoDB Data
 
          <QuerySet [<Viewer: Khal Drogo>]>
 
-   .. step:: Query the movies collection for runtime values
+   .. step:: Query the "movies' collection for specified runtime values
 
       Run the following code to query the ``sample_mflix.movies``
       collection for movies that have a ``runtime`` value less than

source/django-get-started/django-write-data.txt

@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ Write Data to MongoDB
       database by visiting the http://127.0.0.1:8000/sample_mflix/viewers_list/
       URL. You should see a list of ten viewer names in the ``sample_mflix.users``
       database, with your new viewer listed at the top. Ensure that the
-      viewer named "Alliser Thorne", deleted in the previous step, does not appear
+      viewer named "Alliser Thorne", deleted in a previous step, does not appear
       in this list.
 
 After completing these steps, you have inserted and edited documents