RR feedback

Author: mcmorisi

source/monitoring.txt

@@ -23,8 +23,9 @@ Overview
 In this guide, you can learn how to configure **monitoring** in {+driver-short+}
 by using {+driver-short+}'s callback-based interface. Monitoring is the process of
 gathering information about your application's behavior as it runs.
-This can help you make informed decisions when designing and debugging your application, as
-well as track your application's performance and resource usage.
+This information can help you make informed decisions when designing and debugging your application.
+You can also use information from monitoring events to track your application's performance
+and resource usage.
 
 The driver provides information about your application by emitting events. You can
 listen for driver events to monitor your application.