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Author: norareidy

docs/query-builder.txt

@@ -351,7 +351,7 @@ Match Dates Example
 The following example shows how to use the ``where()``
 query builder method to retrieve documents from the
 ``movies`` collection in which the ``released`` value
-is ``2010, 1, 15, 0, 0, 0``, specified in a ``Carbon`` object:
+is January 15, 2010, specified in a ``Carbon`` object:
 
 .. literalinclude:: /includes/query-builder/QueryBuilderTest.php
    :language: php

docs/upgrade.txt

@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ This library version introduces the following breaking changes:
   filters to the ``where()`` method or as data passed to the ``insert()`` and
   ``update()`` methods. 
 
-  For an example that passes a ``Carbon`` object to the
+  To view an example that passes a ``Carbon`` object to the
   ``DB::where()`` method, see the :ref:`laravel-query-builder-wheredate`
   section of the Query Builder guide.