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Co-authored-by: Jens Pryce-Åklundh <[email protected]>

Author: rsill-neo4j

modules/ROOT/pages/deprecations-additions-removals-compatibility.adoc

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ WITH datetime('2024-06-27T14:30:45.123456789+02:00[Europe/Paris]') AS dt
 RETURN format(dt, "yyyy-MM-dd'T'HH:mm:ss.SSSZ") AS x
 ----
 
-| Cypher's new xref:functions/temporal/format.adoc[format function] can create dynamically formatted string representations of temporal instance and duration types.
+| Cypher's new xref:functions/temporal/format.adoc[`format()]` function can create dynamically formatted string representations of temporal instance and duration types.
 
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modules/ROOT/pages/functions/temporal/format.adoc

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-:description: Cypher provides a function for creating dynamically formatted string representations of temporal instance and duration types.
+:description: Information about Cypher's function to format temporal instance and duration values.
 :table-caption!:
 
 [[query-functions-temporal-format]]
@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
 [[query-functions-temporal-format-function]]
 == format()
 
-The format function creates dynamically formatted string representations of temporal instance and duration types.
+The `format()` function creates dynamically formatted string representations of temporal instance and duration types.
 The output format can be customized via the `pattern` parameter.
-Creating a pattern follows the rules for the link:https://docs.oracle.com/en/java/javase/21/docs/api/java.base/java/time/format/DateTimeFormatter.html[Java DateTimeFormatter].
+The `pattern` parameter follows the link:https://docs.oracle.com/en/java/javase/21/docs/api/java.base/java/time/format/DateTimeFormatter.html[Java DateTimeFormatter].
 If no pattern is specified, the function returns an ISO-formatted string.
 
 .Details
@@ -25,7 +25,8 @@ If no pattern is specified, the function returns an ISO-formatted string.
 [[query-functions-temporal-format-instance-types]]
 == Instance types
 
-Cypher's instance types are `DATE`, `LOCAL TIME`, `ZONED TIME`, `LOCAL DATETIME` and `ZONED DATETIME`, refer to xref:/values-and-types/temporal.adoc#cypher-temporal-instants[temporal instants].
+Cypher's instance types are `DATE`, `LOCAL TIME`, `ZONED TIME`, `LOCAL DATETIME` and `ZONED DATETIME`.
+For more information, see xref:/values-and-types/temporal.adoc#cypher-temporal-instants[Values and types -> temporal instants].
 
 Use the characters in xref:#query-functions-temporal-format-instance-types-characters[] to create a string pattern for instance types.
 
@@ -232,10 +233,12 @@ The three occurrences of `p` add one space character of padding to the two digit
 
 Use the characters in xref:#query-functions-temporal-format-duration-types-characters[] to create a string pattern for duration types.
 
-Cypher's duration type `DURATION` has components and component groups, see xref:values-and-types/temporal.adoc#cypher-temporal-accessing-components-durations[components of durations].
+Cypher's duration type `DURATION` has components and component groups.
+For more information, see see xref:values-and-types/temporal.adoc#cypher-temporal-accessing-components-durations[Values and types -> components of durations].
 
-If the string pattern contains a character from a component group but does not contain a character denoting a longer duration from the same group, `format()` converts the longer duration to the equivalent duration with the character that is present, for example a missing `y` (year) will be converted to four quarters, if `q` is present in the string pattern.
-This is because without a reference point, there is no way of determining the specifics of a duration.
+If the string pattern contains a character from a component group but does not contain a character denoting a longer duration from the same group, `format()` converts the longer duration to the equivalent duration with the character that is present.
+For example a missing `y` (year) will be converted to four quarters, if `q` is present in the string pattern.
+This is because without a reference point, there is no way to determine the specifics of a duration.
 
 
 [[query-functions-temporal-format-duration-types-examples]]